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03-21-03, 12:23 AM
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what about me
IP: 9E55 AEF2
i just posted my first pots and here it is
dressed my self up in a suit and tie// fuck weapons.walked straraight up to the gaurd and put my finger in his eye told the fag ta fill up the fuckin bag// bucket fulla bills ima get some pills fuckit i getcha all high is it any good, or decent even |
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03-21-03, 12:50 AM
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IP: 9E55 AEF2
its was in robbing a bank in 4 lines
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03-21-03, 12:56 AM
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IP: E0D8 D2ED
its wasnt all that good, im sayin i couldnt get into it. it was to short.
try slowin down take some time and write a lil longer next time and its the last bar didnt even go with the first 3 keep practicine and read what other catz on here write dont streal their style or rhymes but use their styles to develop your own. keep droppin youll get better and try battlin too if u havent already ull see a style u might wanna try idk juss my opinion good luck dawg keep spittten |
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