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Don't Try
IP: 55BB 7296
I be the lyrical poltergeist when it comes to females//
My rhymes come quick like a 1minute man who can't prevail// Oh my, you betta not try, cuz I'll crush ya rookie, like cookie monster loving his cookies// Stomp on ya then laugh in you face// Make ya mo'embarrassed than the Clinton case// I'm known for blowin' up spots so if you gots issues, betta keep em' covered// Cuz if I find out, I'll dig em' up and report em' live like most wanted on discovered// I'm quick and fast so you'll neva catch up to me// You stay 10 levels down and you're still trying to be me?// Nigga......... When I spit cover ya eyes cuz they might get blurry// Come'in in slide'in as if my words are so slurry// Keep ya filled wit chills as if ya was holdin' a mcflurry// WHOA Yea I kno........ You can't keep up so call it quits// You as bad as a virgin just suckin' tits// My-my, so don't even try, cuz if you step to me you'll be running back screamin' WHY!!!!!!!!!!// |
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IP: 16CE 0E8C
try and up your vocab... you have some good potential
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: B651 A6D5
^^^agreed... keep rhymin
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IP: 4577 CD9A
"My rhymes come quick like a 1minute man who can't prevail"... feeling the punchline there... hehehe... mah favorite in the rhyme actually... hey girl you did straight... it started off well, but then I got simpler, and it fell off at some points, and the flow here was straight...
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IP: 55BB 7296
yea I kno but that was off the crazy dome doin' it for fun
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i changed my title !!
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IP: 71E0 21F0
a couple of alright punches in there nice flow uppin the volcab would help aside from that alright post keep it up
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