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03-22-03, 12:41 PM
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"my Utopia"
IP: A1A2 1F1D
"MY UTOPIA"
My utopia is a place where mothers feed they children Not where mothers sell crack out the same building My utopia is a place where we can smoke purple haze Not a place where we have to pull out ak's and blaze My utopia is a place where we can sit around and drink 40's Not a place where we have to worry about the authorities My utopia is a place where we can leave a door unlocked Not a place where u sleep on the couch with your gun cocked My utopia is a place where u can just breath Not a place where u wanna hold your breath until u fall asleep. |
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03-22-03, 03:35 PM
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
Not diggin this thread at all. It lacks substance
And the usage of Utopia is being used in a rather ironic context. A utopia is a place where its morally perfect. Unless smoking weed and getting drunk is part of your ideal moral utopia world. -1-
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03-22-03, 03:40 PM
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IP: A1A2 1F1D
A utopia is a perfect world(in the specific persons mind) so in my mind this is a small part of my utopia, u and noone else can define my utopia, but on the same level i cant define yours or anybody else's. a utopia is not a fact its an opinion, there is not right or wrong
ie: abortion in my utopia there would be none in somebody else's there might be |
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03-22-03, 03:41 PM
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IP: 8207 22C0
MAN i like this piece but i seen better ones from yo other pieces but this suggesting some kinda Thug Mension....thats my Utopia..lol
Wun
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03-24-03, 02:02 PM
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IP: BFE5 28C7
Utopia...hmmm...
...well simply done...you approached the topic of living in a 'ghetto' like life, and how it's so bad, that your Utopia would be something that is quite normal and constant for people living more well off... i thought the ending was a bit off....i mean if it was meant to keep the reader going, like there's so much more , that you can't list it all, then i felt you could've ended it with something better, more striking...and if it wasn't then i felt it would've been better 'fade' it with 2-4 lines of oversight or something.... but as i said, simply done, but fairly effective... |
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