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KenShin
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Harsh Thoughts
IP: ED96 6894
Lil short but i hope you enjoy........
You every feel so fuckin mad you could just strangle a person to death and look in there fuckin eyez why u doing with out any regret......if you have........YOU FUCKIN CRAZY....lol....straight LOCO Hopefully looking forward to your demise pain left to agonize, to pleasure me with your out-cry's It gives me pleasure to see you in so much greif i never like you i alwayz wanted your life-span to be breif i sigh by not saying good-bye to your final seconds i cheer as your chest breath shorten and lessing half of a smile on my face as i pierce your eyes with a grimey look i pray to satan and thank him for the worthless life he just took the only thing i question is what took him so long you shoulda died when you was conceived...along with her mom your face alone is aggravation in its physical form i curse the day you was born...when the doctor place you in your mothers arm Holla back wit sum feedback......
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IP: D3CD 5FCE
lol, shawt but sweet....nice drop....
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: 144A ADA4
yea, you should continue this, I was feelin' the anger/ psychotic mood.. flow was there, vocab was there, it was good...
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KenShin
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IP: ED96 6894
word...yea i shoulda wrote more...shit woulda been hot....thanx for the feedback tho......uppin fo more
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Guest
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IP: 4577 CD9A
pretty deep bro.....
im likin it.... |
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Guest
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Could've been better...but nice drop, nonetheless...work on wordplay, end your bars with multisyllable rhymes...it'll sound much better in audio, and look better in text...
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