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Old 03-28-03, 12:42 AM   #1
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NoNsense (about war)

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just some small insights


Bush should be pushed of the pedistal he cushioned himself on/
Visited rigid countries to get rid of their bombs/
Disarm and withdraw from anything that could cause harm/
No one bothers us cuz of our infinite fireamrs/
So FUCK nuke em all Bush quit starin at your palms/
Everyone panic and act frantic, dont ever remain calm/
Everyone join in to destroy our fuckin lives/
It could happen on the count of five/ no one left alive/
no one has survived/ no one has realized/
no one has real eyes/ to see what i see/
war is to jeopradize the future in our lives/
You mindless numbskulls/ bodies will fill up by the bucketfulls/
bucketsfull of innocent civilians who wanted to fuckin show/
their kids down the right path, not down an empty hole/
a life of plentiful happiness/ Cmon be skeptical/
My thoughts are like a full clip, fuck that a sash full of rounds/
We dont need Saddan taking out a handful of our towns/


Man fuck the goverment, fuck all that, Cmon keep destroying and making enemies, no one gives a fuck about us....you stupid constipated weiner dogs!!


critique....

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Old 03-28-03, 12:43 AM   #2
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respond y'all
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Old 03-28-03, 02:31 AM   #3
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Who's side are you on? Hard to tell...I agree with half of it....good observations...good piece.
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Old 03-28-03, 08:15 AM   #4
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read like poetry more than rhyme. i agree with the message but i think vocab was a little basic here.

good to see a non-gangsta concept here.
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Old 03-28-03, 01:04 PM   #5
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thanx....im on no ones side....i just dont agree with war
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Old 03-28-03, 08:41 PM   #6
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uppins
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Old 03-29-03, 12:46 PM   #7
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nice piece dogg
the flow was a lil tough to follow at times
but overall it was a good drop
I also like the sense of sarcasm in it
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