do we now whut the fuck we really fightin for/
we sit back and relax while da man is kickin down da door
im sick of bein casted into a fuckin shadow and not told why/
leave us in the dark but then tell us ta salute wit pride
whut used to be the basis of the american dream/
is now instituted by politics as a diabolical get rich scheme
we fight for money, respect, power and fame/
and we all die wit the same damn shame
but we're yet to notice all the fuckin problems we have/
we only care about portfolio's and gettin broke off half
even education is a fuckin fight to the top of da class/
2.0 or lower and u get dismissed like yesterdays trash
i cant even go to skool wit out it bein a competition/
and den dey wonder why r kids have so much confliction
within them, and the only way they let it out is to scream and shout/
but fuck it whut am i talkin about
i got to go to work to raise the bar so none of ya otha niggas pass me/
why'd i even write dis shit u kno whut dont ask me

vocab was alrite, flow was alrite, not bad but not very good either

this was nice, dont worry about the vocab you dont need big vocab if you get your point across.

not bad, didn't really get into the flow, some a'ight bars...

"we only care about portfolio's and gettin broke off half
even education is a fuckin fight to the top of da class/"...

up your vocab a little bit, it really helps..

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