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Old 04-02-03, 08:59 AM   #1
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day to day

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struggle again to get outta bed//
hit the 9 to 5 or no one get's fed
baby's momma out gettin tore up//
while these goddamn bills keep pilin up
incorrect, no respect at home or work, i wanna defect//
but the thought of my daughter keeps my rejected ass in chikitty -check
car still busted, so ima have to bus-it, 3 mile ride//
sittin next to these ruffians
how can it be, the boss is hatin on me//
for bein 3 minutes late but why can't he see
been bustin my ass for so long at this plant//
i wanna get out of this town but i can't
mom and pop can't help with shit//
he's always drunk and she's always sick
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Old 04-02-03, 09:28 AM   #2
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Nice lil spit.
Basically it's a real life spit.
I like it though.
Keep em comin..
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Old 04-02-03, 02:32 PM   #3
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the same thing ya manup ahead said I could'nt say it better thats just real shit....happens to everybody at some point in time!!!!
keep spittin tho
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Old 04-02-03, 02:36 PM   #4
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Damn well I got this homeboy that can relate to that shit... It reminded me of his life... cause well that's his problems.... nice real life piece.... OoNnEe
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Old 04-02-03, 03:41 PM   #5
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thanks .....uppity up up
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Old 04-06-03, 10:54 PM   #6
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ups
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Old 04-07-03, 06:14 AM   #7
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Yeah man its aiight, basic but to the point, I just got some advice for ya man, stop fucken cloggin up Open Mic, you got like 6 pieces on the front page, what the fuck is that?? You're wasting space for other people to get replies and its just not wanted man, sure you can ^^up your pieces but not fucken every piece you ever done at the same time....

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Old 04-07-03, 06:20 AM   #8
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They rhyme itself is basic but ya just tellin it as it is. Simple flow and vocab but its effective. way too short aswell u gotta add alot more to it. still will no doubt be a tight piece wit sum more work. anyway cuz RETURN THE FAVOUR check mine BANGKOK BUSINESS im fed up of replyin to every fucka on here and gettin no replies.
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