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04-04-03, 05:35 PM
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Tampons are expensive
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im a fool
IP: EF0A E7B2
before time set d phase let my life hit your face
rippin d rage off this page crackin potheads off d cage others think i aint true with these words from 1 to 92 lovin a guy like yo u for sure is hard to do takin bitches from every1 them thinkin u aint d one i know how this shit goes nobody fuckin knows u made me feel better while im in this world of killers and haters livin and pimpin grindin with players others was sayin u one of 'em cheaters seeing u get all mad when i told u d weird feelin i had fightin 'em all up in my head as m layin in my bed tryin to organize my thoughts relivin each moment of us both never hear from u now i kno i was a fool of me lovin u believin words from ppl as d time has pass lil did i kno every1s kissin my ass feelin shitty wonderin how they treat me thinkin if i believed d wrong treaty feelin lonely but there u was standin behind me catchin me when i fall protectin from jerks who call realizin i did a mistake gettin all messed up and now m here life is gettin fucked up but still he's there stayin by my side wit a stare lovin me and showin all his care i couldnt believe i did sumthin rare believin othaz thoughts ta share now i know life it aint fair cuz he already found the right one pair any1 would never again my heart be repair shouldve closed my ears and just live with fears cuz now all it's clear ..im livin my life now with tears
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> Last edited by shiznit : 04-04-03 at 08:46 PM. |
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04-04-03, 05:36 PM
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IP: 8B67 292D
that was tight!
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04-04-03, 05:36 PM
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IP: A27B 0DF7
"yawns" how old are you rookie?
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04-04-03, 05:40 PM
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IP: EF0A E7B2
rookie my aSS....fuccin NEWB!!
but yeh Uppin!
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> Last edited by shiznit : 04-04-03 at 05:56 PM. |
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04-04-03, 05:42 PM
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i thought that nigga was talkin to me
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04-04-03, 05:59 PM
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IP: EF0A E7B2
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he yawnin cuz my shit is borin?....fuck that! uppin still
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04-06-03, 10:21 AM
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IP: 8D88 8B51
i liked the emotions/
keep preaching my fellow poet/ peeped your pic/ very cute/ BE PEACEFUL
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04-06-03, 12:45 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
tha wigga angrywhytguy don't know shyt dawg
yo ish was real coo..I could feel your emotions and your rhyme scheme and structure was real smooth... fuckin newb don't know what he is droppin |
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04-06-03, 07:23 PM
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IP: EF0A E7B2
lookin good in d replies....
thanks y'all.... maybe the kid aint no poetry or he aint got shit to do...why he gotta post shit like that but oh well....thanks again... uppin!
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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04-06-03, 08:14 PM
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IP: 95B0 C2C4
nice
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04-08-03, 02:28 PM
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aint much I can say that the others hav'ent this was a real coo piece is was nice to come across sumthin I did'nt have to read like 4 times to understand (then again it could be me...shrugs)
anyway nice piece, it was real coo stay on ya toes *~Holler~* |
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