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IP: 12A4 7F12
life in the projects isnt a pretty~site, people gettin killed just over one silly~fight//
cant even walk outside without seein thugz, kats think they ill cuz they got the new style of lugz// next thing u know is ur brother layin in the road dead, one bullet to the chest and out the back is enough said// then ur crew in a brawl over simply nuthin, niggas hustlin to the site cuz they think they got soomethin// and ur life is depressing and every second ur stressing, cuz niggas get u into shit and they have a hard time confessing// ~out~ |
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IP: 12A4 7F12
uppin fo some feed back
it only took 2min. to key it so i thought it was pretty good |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
real life feelin' always the best topic dawg...i felt it man it was hott keep elavatin up ya skillzzzz
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IP: 12A4 7F12
thanks much luv.............feedback plz
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IP: 5153 3B92
This was cool it was just short i want to hear more about ya piece next time make it longer..1
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IP: 12A4 7F12
aight thanks.....feedback needed
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IP: EB7F 19E1
wasn't toobad. could improve and could make it longer. nice lil drop though. and for 2 min its pretty good.....also, could you vote on m2 vs unfadeable? thanks ,man
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IP: 9F91 B0D6
it was aight man, it was good for a 2min piece, but i know u can do ALOT better.. i aint gona put u down for how shortness of it cause that was the point of it.. but elaborate on vocab..
keep spittin, lookin foward to seein some more of your stuff peace out... |
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IP: 12A4 7F12
thanks for the feedback
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yeah kid it was aight....but jus dont say much in it.....expand it and let more of ya own feelins explode into it
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