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Old 04-04-03, 10:37 PM   #1
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life in the projects isnt a pretty~site, people gettin killed just over one silly~fight//

cant even walk outside without seein thugz, kats think they ill cuz they got the new style of lugz//

next thing u know is ur brother layin in the road dead, one bullet to the chest and out the back is enough said//

then ur crew in a brawl over simply nuthin, niggas hustlin to the site cuz they think they got soomethin//

and ur life is depressing and every second ur stressing, cuz niggas get u into shit and they have a hard time confessing//


~out~
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Old 04-04-03, 11:14 PM   #2
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uppin fo some feed back

it only took 2min. to key it so i thought it was pretty good
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Old 04-04-03, 11:17 PM   #3
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real life feelin' always the best topic dawg...i felt it man it was hott keep elavatin up ya skillzzzz
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Old 04-04-03, 11:29 PM   #4
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thanks much luv.............feedback plz
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Old 04-04-03, 11:37 PM   #5
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This was cool it was just short i want to hear more about ya piece next time make it longer..1
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Old 04-04-03, 11:52 PM   #6
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aight thanks.....feedback needed
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Old 04-05-03, 01:14 AM   #7
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wasn't toobad. could improve and could make it longer. nice lil drop though. and for 2 min its pretty good.....also, could you vote on m2 vs unfadeable? thanks ,man
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Old 04-05-03, 08:48 AM   #8
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it was aight man, it was good for a 2min piece, but i know u can do ALOT better.. i aint gona put u down for how shortness of it cause that was the point of it.. but elaborate on vocab..
keep spittin, lookin foward to seein some more of your stuff
peace out...
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Old 04-05-03, 01:14 PM   #9
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thanks for the feedback
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Old 04-05-03, 01:48 PM   #10
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yeah kid it was aight....but jus dont say much in it.....expand it and let more of ya own feelins explode into it
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