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04-18-03, 12:43 AM | #1 | ||||||
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"Fallen"
IP: 3C19 C433
sort of an old-school style, just off the top of my head
fallen from the sky, fallen from the heart of God/ banished from paradise and envy is the cause/ walked with the angels and talked with your God/ but a tear for me is a tear to be lost/ Eve had a bite and Cain had an Abel/ Christ tried to lie but found he was unable/ so I took him with me for a good forty or so/ did he give in, the Bible says no/ but only me and the god amongst men know the truth/ but to kiss and tell is to diss and be rude/ I was there when Hitler came into power/ helped aimed two planes towards two towers/ and two planes nailed these twin towers/ I was there at bin Laden's finest hour/ I was there when Mary finally lost her flower/ I wasnt a snake in real life/ the Good Book just likes to lie/ gluttony, sloth, wrath, greed, envy, lust and pride/ these bring smiles and joy to a father's eyes/ you should sing praise to me/ cuz with out me, good could never have be/ |
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04-18-03, 12:47 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 5153 3B92
damn...... thats all i gotta say, fuck im amazed, that was off da hook , really best i heard 4m u, damn........
p.s. check out my spit ''lookin at tommorow'' |
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04-18-03, 01:12 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: EB7F 19E1
this was a nice drop. i liked it alot. i think the only thing you should try to add is more multis. keep spittin
also could you peep my shit? its called, "Growin Up" |
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04-18-03, 01:50 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 2811 B7BF
thx for the replies
ya after re-readin it, it could have used some multies but like i said i just felt like writin and whatever came out came out, check out my other open mic "The Lonely Mic" its much better, I think and I will peep both of yas shit |
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