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Old 04-20-03, 11:03 PM   #1
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i lost my mind part 3

IP: 5153 3B92

i don't have to tell you this again/
cus nigga this is the end/
it's that plain i've gon insane/
everything i was i ain't never gettin it back i lost it in the brain/
it's like Cypress Hill said insane in tha membrane/
i guess this is good-bye to the game,the fame,my dream to entertain/
look at me i'm a discrace to this place/
is this somethin i could ever replace/
could i ever retrace my steps and my mistakes/
could i bring back all those dead bodies from the lakes/
i tried asking for forgiveness/
the only thing i was left with was my lonelyness/
being an outkast made me go crazy/
i didn't do anything about it i guess i must be lazy/
please believe me i'm tryin to change/
shit i'm not use to this feelin its really strange/
the doctor gave me some pills to control my anger/
i forgot to take them and now ya life is in danger/

that's all i could hink of right now it was somethin quik
so give me some feedback
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Old 04-21-03, 11:30 PM   #2
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ay yo quit sleepin i need some feedback

peace
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Old 04-22-03, 08:35 PM   #3
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uppin
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Old 04-22-03, 10:59 PM   #4
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please give me feedback
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Old 04-23-03, 10:53 AM   #5
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this was ight...ur flow was pretty good, alittle off in some places...Keep spittin yo...i see potential in you, payce
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