Match up: Sunday
Check in by: Tuesday
Verses by: Friday

30 line max.
no hate/dick ryder votes.
no senseless beef.

Good luck.

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checkin in

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I checked in yesterday, but I guess it didn't register...

Its Goes A Little Something Like This

Yo Dirty Shanks is the guy who sees Jay Pana n suddenly wanks
A buttered knive aint gonna save ya life cuz face it you commited lyrical suicide
The deph~InIt~Ion of you is wack in the rapbattles verbal dictionary
Limited is ya vocabulary n to win this battle ya better pray to god n say a hell mary
After this battle ya styles gon be like ya face needin abit of a re-arrangment
Cuz face it im gonna send you to a different type of one- nation basement
A place where evey wack mc knows ya face n even they feel in disgarce
The shanks are placed n there gettin too tight
Ima leave you lookin like Justin Timberlake in a late night bar fight
Man ya listen to 50 so ya think ya cool
Man ya lyrics remind me of a no-body rapper named ja fool
Ya flow aint dirty its just fuckin all over the place
Ya like a sub woofer that produces no muh fukkin bass
This is Line number 14 man you'd make the wack lyrical dream team
Man ya spit the rappin alternative to a nursery rhyme
You define a defeat in front lines
Now thiss RBBL verse is over like ya carrer
Killa Kobra jus droped now you'll be livin in fear

I'll be sure to peep this when dirty drops
dont worry about crew vote.. I explain my votes

peep me vs waur as well

yo shanks couldn't post hiz verse before tha due date 'cuz he gotta work out sum issuez.

so do i win or what??

Sorry, I'm on leave from tha Navy, so I can see my family...
I could not post at tha time I was needed. I will do my verse now, and if it counts Thank You for understanding..

I try'd to let it be known, and posted in my crew forum real quick. I had to go, I mean Real Fast, I had no time at all..

I'll be postin' really soon, just smoke a cig and I'll get to it..

k then im down but we'll need some quick votes

*I do all this stupid shit to make my verse look really cool, all tha cool guys do it. Yo Yo Yo grabs tha mic that aint there, YoYOyOYO tokyo hoe!! looks at an invisable crowd, starts feelin tha intense heat from tha peeps... I begin to DROP THIS... Yo YO Yo!!*

...........HA!
Killa don't know he battles wack spit, I guess kk's just.. to lagit to quit!..
duk can't touch this, even if he was an MC wit a hammer lookin' pist!!..
but he get's pissed on & drenshed by tha only hot flow he ever felt!..
I can't do nothin else to Kobra, so I'll make tha snake kill its-self!!..
tha weakest link to claim Pro, and continues to think he brings pain?!..
Damn right, ya rhymes would hurt any duk that loves to wright tight!..
Word is Bond and I'll shoot some advice, Killa's... Stay tha Fuck outta sight!!..
Man.. I couldn't be more nice, so I'll beat ya once and not think about twice!!..
kk does research on my type, WTF ya wanna find a book about my life?!..
I'll hook ya up.. with spit's that kats like, lickin' Butter off tha tip of my knife!!..
His punches don't connect, no way you’ll win this after I stomp ya dell!..
Kobra's wreck?.. think of a preist dying, this Killa's got no chance in hell!!..
Have ya flow freeze and leave ya nose broke from me swingin' a bat!..
His (w)raps is plastic, shit was so easy to rip I feel I should thank the kat!!..
Ya name.. I'm trashin on it, my punches land harder than crashin comets!..
ya spits are ass n vomit, ya dad put's dick to ya mouth cause ya askin' for it!!..

16 bars 2 less than him...

good luck, please let this count... sorry I was late...

Vote Now, please.........

uppin

Although i really liked the Ja Fool line my votes goin to Shanks.

He flowed betta and his wordplay aint bad. Good work from both peepz.

VOTE => Shanks <=

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0780#post400780

vote - shanks for better overall verse

killa u are elevatin but u gotta remember to rhyme playa. Some of ya lines deppressed me cuz they had good ideas then they didn't rhyme. Keep spittin, tho, u gettin there.

Shanks - Classic Shanks... but the intro was gay. lol

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...