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Old 05-01-03, 08:16 PM   #1
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Unhappy pain of plane by Eviley

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As they sat there waiting for her plane to arrive
she was leaving him, Her soul her life
as tears pour down her cheek like a waterfall of brokenheart
she whispers softly into his ear that she loved him from the start

they remember the times they had during her stay
or that first time he kissed her cheek by the waterbay
he told her all you can remember is the goodtimes we had
now go back to your old life don't think of me and be sad
i'm there in heart but not in touch, i will miss your presence here soo much

they stood up and gazed into the doors of eachothers soul and saw eachothers heart which they both stole
his hand glided across the water of pain on her face of sorrow
even though there won't be a tomorrow
they hugged eachother goodbye as the noise of a ladies voice who said her plane has arrived
she kissed him and whispered i love you into his ear
as she handed him her necklace without hesitant fear

she slowly backed away and looked one last time into his eyes
turning not looking back cause she feared her cries
there fingers tips slipped away from eachothers
so many tales they have heard of young lovers

she handed her boarding pass to what she thought was hell
not looking to which was once her heaven, soon after fell
he watched her fly above his head till she out of sight
and he felt empty and dead, water appeared without a fight

a tear went down his cheek by just the thought of her
his eyes watered and said it's not fair
he walked to his car with nothing but silence,not even a word
he place her picture on the car dashboard

and drove away from what was pain
and never looked back till they meet again.







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Old 05-02-03, 02:05 AM   #2
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As they sat there waiting for her plane to arrive
she was leaving him, Her soul her life
as tears pour down her cheek like a waterfall of brokenheart
she whispers softly into his ear that she loved him from the start


....damn
i got that feeling.
that life just sucks.

they remember the times they had during her stay
or that first time he kissed her cheek by the waterbay
he told her all you can remember is the goodtimes we had
now go back to your old life don't think of me and be sad
i'm there in heart but not in touch, i will miss your presence here soo much


...feeling it. a lot

they stood up and gazed into the doors of eachothers soul and saw eachothers heart which they both stole
his hand glided across the water of pain on her face of sorrow
even though there won't be a tomorrow
they hugged eachother goodbye as the noise of a ladies voice who said her plane has arrived
she kissed him and whispered i love you into his ear
as she handed him her necklace without hesitant fear

jesus eva....
you got me sad...

she handed her boarding pass to what she thought was hell
not looking to which was once her heaven, soon after fell
he watched her fly above his head till she out of sight
and he felt empty and dead, water appeared without a fight

.....damn....
your good


a tear went down his cheek by just the thought of her
his eyes watered and said it's not fair
he walked to his car with nothing but silence,not even a word
he place her picture on the car dashboard

and drove away from what was pain
and never looked back till they meet again.


excellent ending..



AMAZING read...jesus..
i feel all emotional reading
this for "some" reason.
i dunno. but this was
very nice....good job
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Old 05-09-03, 11:38 PM   #3
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DAAAAAm gurl nice drop!

really felt emotion on this it was my favorite of ures so far, but i hope there's more to come.
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Old 05-11-03, 02:27 PM   #4
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there sure is ill...thanxz a bunch
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Old 05-14-03, 11:12 PM   #5
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eva your shit is tight it is very touching. I think its cool no matter all the fucked up shit that happens they go on to only remember the good times keep this shit up cause u good at it.
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Old 05-15-03, 12:06 AM   #6
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thanxz again... i appreciate you checkin out all of my shit
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Old 05-17-03, 05:56 PM   #7
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......brilliant....



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Old 05-18-03, 10:16 PM   #8
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thank you......

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