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As they sat there waiting for her plane to arrive
she was leaving him, Her soul her life as tears pour down her cheek like a waterfall of brokenheart she whispers softly into his ear that she loved him from the start they remember the times they had during her stay or that first time he kissed her cheek by the waterbay he told her all you can remember is the goodtimes we had now go back to your old life don't think of me and be sad i'm there in heart but not in touch, i will miss your presence here soo much they stood up and gazed into the doors of eachothers soul and saw eachothers heart which they both stole his hand glided across the water of pain on her face of sorrow even though there won't be a tomorrow they hugged eachother goodbye as the noise of a ladies voice who said her plane has arrived she kissed him and whispered i love you into his ear as she handed him her necklace without hesitant fear she slowly backed away and looked one last time into his eyes turning not looking back cause she feared her cries there fingers tips slipped away from eachothers so many tales they have heard of young lovers she handed her boarding pass to what she thought was hell not looking to which was once her heaven, soon after fell he watched her fly above his head till she out of sight and he felt empty and dead, water appeared without a fight a tear went down his cheek by just the thought of her his eyes watered and said it's not fair he walked to his car with nothing but silence,not even a word he place her picture on the car dashboard and drove away from what was pain and never looked back till they meet again. ![]() ![]() |
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As they sat there waiting for her plane to arrive
she was leaving him, Her soul her life as tears pour down her cheek like a waterfall of brokenheart she whispers softly into his ear that she loved him from the start ....damn i got that feeling. that life just sucks. they remember the times they had during her stay or that first time he kissed her cheek by the waterbay he told her all you can remember is the goodtimes we had now go back to your old life don't think of me and be sad i'm there in heart but not in touch, i will miss your presence here soo much ...feeling it. a lot they stood up and gazed into the doors of eachothers soul and saw eachothers heart which they both stole his hand glided across the water of pain on her face of sorrow even though there won't be a tomorrow they hugged eachother goodbye as the noise of a ladies voice who said her plane has arrived she kissed him and whispered i love you into his ear as she handed him her necklace without hesitant fear jesus eva.... you got me sad... she handed her boarding pass to what she thought was hell not looking to which was once her heaven, soon after fell he watched her fly above his head till she out of sight and he felt empty and dead, water appeared without a fight .....damn.... your good a tear went down his cheek by just the thought of her his eyes watered and said it's not fair he walked to his car with nothing but silence,not even a word he place her picture on the car dashboard and drove away from what was pain and never looked back till they meet again. excellent ending.. AMAZING read...jesus.. i feel all emotional reading this for "some" reason. i dunno. but this was very nice....good job
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DAAAAAm gurl nice drop!
really felt emotion on this it was my favorite of ures so far, but i hope there's more to come. ![]() |
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there sure is ill...thanxz a bunch
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eva your shit is tight it is very touching. I think its cool no matter all the fucked up shit that happens they go on to only remember the good times keep this shit up cause u good at it.
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thanxz again... i appreciate you checkin out all of my shit
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thank you......
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