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Old 05-02-03, 07:10 PM   #1
Assassin Slim
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first flow

IP: 471F CD4A

Words and phrases that rhyme/
fit geological time /
split you up like east and west/
request meridians prime/
to test the depressed obsessed unwelcome guest/
that has fixation in molestation/
grabbing titties and breast/
stabbing you in the chest/
pass the blunt to the left/
cuz more than 2 hits is theft/
hefty weight to be joking
smokin on j and tokin/
thinkin thoughts that's provoking/
put this dick in yer mouth and get to stroking/
the truth will evoke bring forth the choking/
phone booth your call is open/
or cannot be completed as dialed/
offspring, kin, or illegitimate child/
the strongest odor like a black & mild/
make sure my styles correctly filed/

you have to remember that this is my first flow
so be easy on a nigga
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Old 05-02-03, 08:18 PM   #2
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Old 05-02-03, 08:43 PM   #3
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this was good for ya first piece...kinda unclear what the topic is but nice job
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Old 05-02-03, 09:19 PM   #4
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it was str8
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Old 05-02-03, 09:20 PM   #5
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this drop was whack ,, no wordplay , lack metaphorz . lack vocab , , , elevate dawg
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