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Old 05-06-03, 12:53 AM   #1
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16 years...

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I'm lookin' back on my life and I don't like what I see
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
What will I amount to? I haven't chosen a path
All of these emotions sitting in my bath
Gigi said "I know you'll be great." She believed in me
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
2nd string football player on a crappy team
10 weeks wasted from living Gigi's dream
Haven't picked a school probably won't
Dad wants me to be a doctor, I don't
Mom wants me to be a scientist, I won't
What's wrong with them, why can't they see
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
Gigi, I'm nothing special I'm just an average guy
I wish I could have told you that before you died
Why must I bear this awful load
To have to be great is an awful thing to bode
But when I look at myself this is all I see
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be
I have to live that dream, it was her last request
I now bear this burden on my chest
I will not take failure I must be the best
But I have no clue how the hell that'll be
16 years wasted, what have I amounted to be

Gigi is my Great Grandma GG=Gigi

What ya'll think
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Old 05-06-03, 11:10 AM   #2
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Yo I know it's weak, but come on give me some feedback.
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Old 05-06-03, 05:50 PM   #3
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it was pretty good
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Old 05-06-03, 08:02 PM   #4
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....not as good as sum of ur otha shit...kinda repeated ur self at times....but i was feelin it....much respect
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Old 05-06-03, 08:17 PM   #5
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Mad my dawg nice shit didnt know u wus poetic
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Old 05-06-03, 08:23 PM   #6
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Been one forever, that's what started me on rapping.
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Old 05-06-03, 08:30 PM   #7
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this was simple....deep and interesting....i liked it..


i feel yah mad man ive writing poetry all and that helps me a lot when i write rhymes...

do ur thing...hopin to see more of u work

keep droppin!
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Old 05-07-03, 06:26 AM   #8
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it was weak




















heres where you thought i was gunna say j/k str8 poem......





































j/k str8 poem
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Old 05-07-03, 10:14 AM   #9
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lol thanks Kapone ^^^
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