......ok how do i begin......




have i fallen in love is it a dream please someone slap me.
i quit smoking trees how come every piece comes so sappy.
not happy unsure where feelings and emotions stir themselves.
i have confiscated all spoons hoping to finally cure myself.
sure it helped but then i went back to my old ways old speech.
old world found a new girl that became my world in only 2 weeks.
just to think of the fact makes me sick and even nausous.
i need to be cautious i yell at my heart to please stop this.
now often evas words race my mind like the legs of a jogger.
i want to stop this chasing dream but theres no way to stop her.
so i calm her because i love her but to think of this mess damn.
im so scared shes no doctor only 16 with my heart in her hands.
i start and i end my living with the same daring perfect precision.
came to the conclusion love for you is inevitable not a decision.
current condition enhances the missin. my mission to keep you.
as an aspiring christian our love vicious visions are see through.
happiness when i see you it makes me crumble shrink shout too.
you are my world eva this piece wasnt even suppose to be about you..





sorry to those that want to read
about something else. i have no
ideas of what write except her.
so i write about her...



love u eva!

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This was nice dunz...feelin the emotion you have for ya girl..im sure you treat her like a queen..no doubt..

keep droppin...

peace
-1-

(Mad Man wipes a tear from his eye)
Great shit sand, that is some true heart put into that and I could feel the love, your metaphors were great especially about the one with your heart in her hand. But remember it's better to have love and lost then to never have loved at all.

Yo come peep this if you get a chance, this is where I put my heart and soul.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44567

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hey sand this was really felt man nice emotion and who is it for anyone? This bout Eviley? Cuz ya i talk to her on aim sometimes. Aight nicedrop man keep ya emotions goin.

-OuT-

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Sand this drop was for eviley , , lmao , , ,sand wants to holla at dat female , i kno dat , , cause everytime she post a thread , , he says that he luvs her , , , , , Go sand go sand , , nice emotional drop dawg

what's up this is tamaira and i really like that rap you must have heart postin a sweet little rap like that keep doin what you do boo, that girl must be lucky

uppers.duppers.

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Hey man...told you I'd peep your work, ...err sorry it took so long...you can yell at me *droops head in shame*

Well...

"i quit smoking trees how come every piece comes so sappy" - LoL, I liked that, good line

"not happy unsure where feelings and emotions stir themselves
i have confiscated all spoons hoping to finally cure myself."
Umm...Ok, the first line- oh so true, so true.
The second, I think I got it...Spoons stir?...right? If so...thats good...real good.

"old world found a new girl that became my world in only 2 weeks." - Really nicely worded, also, completely understand what your talking about...Christ sake, how much more am I going to quote, I'm going to be writing a lot here I think...(I quote as I read).

"im so scared shes no doctor only 16 with my heart in her hands." - Focking Good Line!!

Fuck the whole last like 4 or 6 lines were amazing as well, the flow, everything...great

Happy to see you happy Sand. Good piece, ...like I need to even say it :P

Keep it up dude, were still going to collab! ...I guess we need a new topic?...LoL

shit man, you're sunk. The last two pieces I've read from you have been about this chick! well, it's good to see a cat who's really in love, because there's too much superficiality in our world now. This piece had your trademark flow and your amazing wordplay as usual;the reason I always peep your rhymes. Keep the flow man, keep the flow.
Peace

edit: peep my piece dude, the link is in my sig

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

to a love readin yo pieces tey all good keep wit tha lyrics man

diserved respect to the one my thoughts ponder!

heh.
thanks bruk.
collab. def kid..
thanks eva. luv ya.
ill peep those
pieces when i
get a min.

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=o* !!!