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Old 05-10-03, 06:05 PM   #1
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just felt like spittin

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i rip it up when i spit it up, yall can't stop me, so throw your hands up/
listen up, i weigh 145 and i spit ta strive,listen ta me we all gone die/
so be alive,we'll never live for ever but we all gone ride/
an till the day i die, i'ma spit ta strive,be betta than all yall till i take da dive/
so everybody realize, that no one is great, till you see wit your eyez, that their not fake/
an if in fact they are fo real, don't go holdin out ya hands like they got yo meal/
so stay real, an feel, what they got to say,you neva know,one day they might be great/
shit one day that might be yo fate, SO DON'T NEVA HATE!


holla yall
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Old 05-10-03, 06:26 PM   #2
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lol , ,, , , , drop was whack ,,,,,,,,,,,, plain and simple
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Old 05-10-03, 07:30 PM   #3
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Really reallly wack dawg
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Old 05-10-03, 07:31 PM   #4
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Up everything possible go to the tips link on this site and see if theres anything that can help you cus no offence you need it....
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Old 05-10-03, 07:43 PM   #5
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hey thx anywayz yall i'm alwayz takein critisizem...i got a new rap i just made i accually tried a lil harder check it out
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Old 05-10-03, 07:45 PM   #6
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Yeah man you really need to elevate your shit and round out the edges like I do. But keep doing your thing, you can obviously only get better.
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