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key-style, check it out
IP: 4577 CD9A
when i breath
the whole word shatters when i exhale what i think. starting chaos chaotically having psycholgist see "apocalypse now" then just a movie on a screen with two actors that got academies. I believe that lies can get me paid quickly so i become a 50 cent prototype, i been number 1 since last night by calling myself a killer with a dysfunctional family life. ANd it works like the campaign of George Bush only if speak simple and sing all of my hooks. like Nate Dogg-i learned that lesson after 21 questions when the fiftenth came and my girl explain that her giving head wouldn't happen. I became pissed. Told her to get out, but i lied about it. LIke Ja Rule in XXL beating 50 with crutches. BUt that isnt' the half of my war path. like Chuck D, i help the blind see what the time be by using the clock off FLava Flavs body. pointing at the 12 o'clock sign explaining this is when your die. Like the girl out the movie "Ring" coming out the screen burn em with my flow made of kerosene,,,,,,, |
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IP: FF98 53B8
Lyrics were simple , , , lines were too short ,,,,,, no vocab , ,no wordplay ,, this drop was Whack.............i think u can do better dawg
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IP: EEF4 F1BF
dang dawg, bash dont tell him whats bad, tell him waht he can improve on...dam...
Flow: Needs improvement man, its really choppy. Vocab: Boring! No effence but i only read a lil, yet it was small. Length: Make it bigger man. Topic: Lame man, dont talk about gay stuff like money and how you can kick someones ass, speak the truth and speak it good and u'll be hott. aight ya need improvement keep spittin and get better, and take a lookat my stuff. -OuT- |
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