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freestyle, well not really-keystyle
IP: 4577 CD9A
As faggats catch dicks like catchers to a ball pitch in a mit
I twist my body around on a stage like the helix Forget the last line, cause that was supplied like pablo esco, in every nas line Made to be repeated on beat, like a tennis racket hitting a tennis ball from a wall at three feet Now who wants to give a shoutot to me? Probably stupid niggas like Jorge bush who waves at stevie New verse, new realization most emcees curse by the pronounciation brought like voodoo from eves bayou video bootlegged from you because you never had fun with anything magical the factual opinion is a contradiction Forget about a memory because basically when your a weed head like me your bound to forget anything especially if it pertains to respect from anyone in your family cause basically I inspecktah the deck like the one who laced CREAM GZa did the chorus, hes a genius emcee legend of the liquid sword contradiction of what he represents to me something was missing like a song that was good on a canibus cd My friend says the one when he talks about when hes pregnant is cool. But unlike clowns who wear government clothes i aint a fool Those last two lines were wack as shit, a thesis lacked from this seems like something Bash would call JUST FUCKIN PATHETIC. peace. |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
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that was weak.....u just tried to rhyme lines....u should actaully try n rhyme about a topic.........n i dont think there's any freestylin and or keystyling allowed on Open Mic
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IP: 7FEB 4053
SHit is weak.
Straight up man. |
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however, the first 2 lines about the DOUBLE helix would have been phat if he put duoble to even his sylables
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