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05-21-03, 06:53 PM
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Battle Piece
IP: 7A5E D5B8
re newing first post piece..
Last edited by GridLock : 05-21-03 at 07:21 PM. |
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05-21-03, 07:04 PM
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-Merk Squad-
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
you got flow and multie's but its real simple you gotta make it more complex and develop ure punch's cos there a bit played
Read around the site an' have a look at people's work wot they do to complex it and make it hit. Try puches mo' like dis "I'll have you talkin' at a slower pace after I put 'Shells' in ya 'Turtleneck'"/ "essence tryed to 'ride' but could'nt because he gets "CAR SICK"/ Shit like that this thread should go in the wackness centre ai dawg Keep ya head up an' you'll be ai -one love- |
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05-21-03, 10:49 PM
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BANNED for biting
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IP: FF98 53B8
wat da fuck
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05-22-03, 04:16 AM
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IP: 3FF9 C72A
theres no verse to comment on...post it back up?
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