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Livin this life after commencement, no sense of direction/
Got huge loans to repay, health insurance, learnin the lessons/
Looking for sources of income, this mental congestion/
Has got me confessin that I'm in a position to start stressin/
Waiting for life to curve and throw me a break or two/
Frustration, cloud separation, wishin the sun would shine through/
But unfortunately, when it rains, it always decides to pour/
Conversation with God askin him what exactly this life's for/
When 90 percent of the time you're strugglin to get on your feet/
Expects you to have faith in things when you're constantly facing defeat/
Desperately reaching out for dreams that you always awake from/
Hoping somewhere there's someone willin to show love/
Yet in reality you're on your own, you gotta earn it the hard way/
Not gonna stack chips by loungin couch-style with Frito Lay/
But stayin positive's a bitch when the news just portrays the worst/
Murders, Kidnappings, Domestic disputes, "You hear it first!"/
Got these teenagers rapping, crying for help, in every verse/
But these officals just watch, instead of the bus they ride the hearse/
And at the same time we're supposed to try and live the American dream/
While government robs us blind and destroys people's self-esteem/
Fuck that, I'm 21 and I'm already in a ton of debt/
Because of a lousy college degree, these bastards suggest I get/
I'm undeniable proof that the piece of paper don't really mean dick/
It just means I wasted money when I could've been writing this shit!

Syke

just gotta say....its hott....
eyo, i'm lookin fo someone to do a collab wit...Hit me back if ya wanna....

This was hot man......Nice content

Yo Bash, thanks man I'm just trying to raise the level.....know what I mean and Slik.......much love kid but I ain't ready to collab yet I want to sharpen up my shit first.........no disrespect but I'll hit you back let me check out your style haven't really got a chance to read much in here........but i'll holla..........peace

good work man, this was a really real piece. It's cool when shit is real, because al ot of the time its abstract and hard to understand...lol I just wrote a piece that like that. Your flow fell off a few times, but it was generally pretty good
Check out my new one "the straw that broke the camel's back"
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

ight syke...i got some shit posted up in here...."make them listen" check that....hit me back....i know ur new and shit...so take all the time ya need....payce

Yo just wonderin if anyone was interested in some competition.......since I'm new at this shit you'd have to set it up but I just wanna get some battles up under my belt.......Peace