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Old 05-23-03, 08:10 AM   #1
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Keyboard Dimensions (a burst of creativity)

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Ive ENTERed a world in which i cant BACK-SPACE_
SHIFTin letters to get my CAPS straight
Got no CTRL of what I posses in cyber space
yet I still try to ESCAPE_punchin digital pixel gates
My hands get NUM_and My (Paws)Pause-BREAK
wanna get HOME but Im alone in raw weight
Heart beatin_like someones readin my life like chapters in excessive speeds SCROLLin a PAGE
How could Diverse worlds reverse or ALTernate?
I dont know where Im @ but Theres a huge %_im ^ against my fate
+ all my life I felt i was great_Commin at digital visuals faster then lights speed rate
Effortlessly facin hits like feathers on speed ways
Even the words_I INSERT_Reverse_like #3_Backwards

Its not the same_Im like a WINDOW_always feelin the PANE
No HELP yet I still exceed in this game
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Old 05-23-03, 08:31 AM   #2
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ohhhhh clevernesssss......yuhuh...i liked it,coz its clever an all.....nice lil spit,wouldnt get much longer,only so many keys on a keyboard,but yeah,i liked the idea you ahd,was a clever one....keep it up..

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liked the paws(pause) line
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Old 05-23-03, 10:39 AM   #3
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nice stuff ill creativity
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Old 05-23-03, 10:40 AM   #4
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Very good topic, This is a true "Key"style...Mad props...I like the creativity..hope to see some more from you.
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Old 05-23-03, 12:35 PM   #5
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Uppin fo some mo feedback
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Old 05-23-03, 12:40 PM   #6
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Lol.......................This was Ill dawg.....................................
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Old 05-23-03, 09:58 PM   #7
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Old 05-23-03, 10:08 PM   #8
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same as what most peeps have sed-clever idea.....it cud be reall hard but it be better if it was loner but i gess it kinda stretches......nice tho

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Old 05-23-03, 11:02 PM   #9
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hahahahhaa....I LOVED IT!.....very creative...Keep spittin
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Old 05-23-03, 11:36 PM   #10
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yea pound, good shit, i was feelin dat, and da whole verse made sense, none of dat out of wack bullshit, nice ass drop, short and sweet how i like them 2, keep da illness up
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Old 05-23-03, 11:50 PM   #11
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damn creative....

good spit............

wish I had some of that creativity... All I can ever seem to write about is shit from my life...........
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Old 05-24-03, 10:53 AM   #12
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Nice track. Keep it up!
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Old 05-24-03, 09:16 PM   #13
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Fosho Creativity shown on this Piece clever put together...........Nice Drop FAM
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