yo my rhymes are sick/
i make wack emcees choke like they suckin dick/
treatin em like i treat these tricks/
like they nothin/
cause half em just frontin/
they just fake/
for goodnes sake/
quit tryin ta hate/
just jump off my nuts/
yall just like these dirty ass sluts/
now this is goin out to all you haters/
who be actin like some rhyme debaters/
yall worse then American traitors/
and the funny thing is yall act like people care bout what you say/
but i didnt care yesterday and i wont care today/
so all haters just shut the fuck up OK!

wack wakc wakc................yo BRUKLOR DOMAIN 9 can we make it so like peeps who do posts caled "FREESTYLE" or sumthin that like we can close thier thread straight away

^^then theyd just call it somehting other then a freestyle?....eh.....you seriously need to up somehitng shickin kid....righ tnow its to simple,and hte vocab is mad old and psh...used up like crazy,ill make wack emcees choke like they suckin dicks,how many times that been useD?lost count...to damn much..........

that was weak ass shit dawg! you gotta elevate! use a more complex ryhming scheme, make you bars longer!

"Shit I try to make my rhymes like Precision
Is this where I make the incision, erm, no!
AAAAAHHHH, (screams, cries), YOU FUCKING RETARD
At the end of the unsuccessful day, I switch my coat for a Leotard
Give every guy my “business card”, not giving a single fuckin regard
For all my homies on ... hold up, pardon me, this is’nt how it’s supposed to be"

it was wacked, the only way you gonna get better is to keep spittin....so go do us all a favor and spit somewhere else.

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yo that shit was pretty laim, not to cut on yo shit, but you need to take some time and think about the shit you sayin, shits oldschool

Some dope shit going down here/
starting to make me fear/
and i really don't wanan come near/
but i just gotta go and get that cold beer/

lol i sux

lol i sux so don't hate it some some bullshit that just rhymed gg

Whackkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.........Stop spittin