Lol... Up and coming audio lyrics... I'm serious this time...

Thinkin' of what we used to be together/
Remember what you did to me, had to endure the weather/
Depression and alcohol, whoever would've thought you could be my downfall/
Stayin' up late all night makin phone calls, without you life just hit the wall/
Too weak to go on without my girl, would've died for you, gave the world/
MY heartbeat thumpin and pumpin when i see you, You just give me that somethin bein with you/
Palms sweaty, waiting for that sweet kiss, waitin for you to take me to eternal bliss/
I can still remember sittin' and laughin' on past times, like when i used to sell nickels and dimes/
Still see the faces you used to pull, the sounds you make, shame to witness your spirit break/
We used to just play and fight, didnt expect the phone call i was gettin that night/
Used to hit you up with spanish lines, god i wish i could relive it all one more time/

Sorry girl, i wish i could take it all back/
Provoked and i had to react, i didnt mean it like that/
I miss you, but its been going on for too long/
Remember to keep ya head up and be strong/
Just keep this forever as our song/

Its a year later and we've moved in different directions/
Starin at a stranger with a perplexed complextion/
Is it you, or just a new version? 6.0/
I dont know, lookin for the old you, where'd you go?/
Messin with a new crew, shits changed since i left/
Everyday i see you i still have to catch my breath/
So i'll spit till there aint none left, just to show you i love you to death/
I got a new girl, and you got a new man/
Maybe we'll meet again in gods great plan/
Ain't much time left for me, gonna fly outta here move back to kentucky/
I still wonder if years after you remember this/
Our first kiss, your soft lips, i just wish.../
That one day we would cross paths again/
Theres fork in the road, see you later my friend/
A girl like you i'll never be able to comprehend/
I'll still be dreaming of you well into the depends/
Just know that i'll love you till the end/

Sorry girl, i wish i could take it all back/
Provoked and i had to react, i didnt mean it like that/
I miss you, but its been going on for too long/
Remember to keep ya head up and be strong/
Just keep this forever as our song/

Was going to add more but its just a simple key... any ideas? A concept in the making...

This was nice man...
heartfelt shit..

keep postng

Starin at a stranger with a perplexed complextion/
Is it you, or just a new version? 6.0/nice

the first verse was more complex but the second one was deeper

nice one.............SLADIN u could've tried harder to reply..........blah blah inspire the usual vocab flow mulites shit good..........


STOP SLEEPING PEOPLE

^^definetly feelin it inspire,nicely written good vocab,and a good story...liked the hook...the fork in the road line was nice,youll never comphrehend,very nicely written inspire...i liked th esecond verse more,,the first..seemed a bit out,dunno why,amybe the rhyme scheme was different or soethign small i couldnt pick uptrills right..second verse deeper,first complex...mix em both so you have complex deepness...ill..

nicely written i liked it...

bismillah

^^^work in progress... much love for the replies...

Ill piece.........I was loving it.........U came back wit a strong piece........Katie died.........How did she die............?

that was ill, a lil low on tha multis but u dont always need multis to make a god piece,it was def. deep,i wass feelin it,keep spittin,peace kidd

this was very nice, I was feeling it, kinda reminds me of a relationship I had. anyway, this had some great lines, more original than most people's love pieces, and it had hook. I miss hooks, they used to be in every piece, and now maybe 1 in 5 pieces have them. AND the hook fit the piece perfectly.
this kind of reminded me of one of those punk songs about love...take that as a complement, I love punk.
check out my stigmata piece
Peace

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Bash you are the stupidest person on RB... serious... SHE DID NOT DIE WHERE THE HELL DID YOU PULL THAT FROM... and im not a femcee dammit...

lol@bash... uppin

You're a emcee i didnt kno dat........Ur name sound like a femcee name and ur avator is a female......My bad dawg...........

hahaha^^Mad funniness mix-up..LMAO..haha Nice piece but Inspire...Came dope on this one...Upppin this one....

.....................Pz......................

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this was hott, and the thread is funny, lol @ you and bash. nahh seriously this was off the hook can u peep my piece called Cream 2003

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inspire is a girl....
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typing like him (he's my idol)
dopeneess on this one....
lets collab...im starting audio
soon homie...lets do it....

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