The breeze hit his face, putting him in his place feeling weak to the knees |
The door kicked in, cops swarmed in looking Chinese, Japanese |
Ready to give their guns a slight squeeze if Corey didn't freeze |
He was frozen like the ice caps, ready to have his bones collapse |
He couldn't move hearing all his favorite raps |
In his head, had so much to go couldn't see himself dead |
He had to look ahead, to late now should have fled |
He lifted the chrome, shots ran out throughout his home |
The slugs went on the roam, smashing the dome |
That held the cops brain, he added a few more slain |
Digging himself deeper now he leapt for the window not a care of the rain |
That poured down hard and long, he didn't belong there did to much wrong |
But now was the time to stay strong, all day long |
He planned how to get out when the heat was to much to bear |
But he wasn't aware that he should have said his last prayer |
He ran past me now on the sidewalk only to glare like as a dare |
Not to stop him or try and help him, his story something like Jakob Ludwig Karl Grimm |
I watched as he kept on the run the sun getting dim, couldn't see him |
Anymore as for the skies became grey and the rain feel all day |
He stopped to pray, he felt the need as well as to shed the greed of the display |
He put on over the past few times, but that's the end of these rhymes |
Before Corey could finish his silence a shot rang out killing him for his crimes. |

The story of Corey is now done....

This one is longer than the first, give me your thoughts on this and if you havent then hook me up for the first part which ya can find the link in my sig.

R.x Out.

tight drop dawg, u still need to elivate.... but tight all da same

Thanks and im trying to elivate dawg so thanks for the imput

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R.x Out.

mostly dawg the more more shit u read n broaden what u listen to elivatin just happins,,,, u dont even no u did keep spittin dawg respect

tht was nice man im i like the way u tell the story still u up ur vocab and u got potential

Aight thanks for the tips and all i will work on that for my next drop.

R.x Out

My Life, comning soon.

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Need more thoughts on this and dont forget the first part, see sig for link.

yeah ya shit was hot but need more elevation

Aight thanks i will try that for the next post i do.

that was hot.

Nice story telling dawg.......Ill piece