I just wrote this out of boredom...But please tell me what you think...

The summer breeze flows through your hair
Running down the road, without a care
Feeling the sand beneath your toes
The temperature in the highs, not the lows
Feeling the sun upon your skin
Glad that it is summer time once again
Looking out at the waves
Splashing into rocks and hidden caves
Spending all your time at the beach
The sun giving your hair a natural bleach
Going out to hang with friends
Picking up the summers new trends
Laying outside under the sun
Watching the younger ones have fun
Wearing Skirts and shorts
Being with family at local resorts
Enjoying the water and swimming
All the spring grass now needs trimming
The neighbors flowers have been planted
Your summer wishes are being granted
Schools out and summer has began
Laying under the sun and getting a tan
Not caring if you have a dollar or a dime
Your just happy that It's Summer Time

nice to see somethin light around here, pleasant diversion, good piece...

Thank you for your response! I appreciate it ...

peAce

Yeah...No More "Im Fucked Up" Verses...They Are Pestering

This Is They Type Of Shit I Like To Read On A Saturday Mornin' Lol

i feel your shit cause u got real shit i liked this one to i actually get to see a brighter side of you, dont change your style though,nice drop keep spittin baby girl. peace.

*yay!*...what a great poem....i mean wow a happy one...cuz ya know most of all the poems here are about suicide...being fucked up...unrequited love mostly....lost...but this one..when u read it ..it would just makes ur day...nice one...

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<br><br><center>- Shiznit -
- Tampons are still expensive -
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Ahh! The light! It's burning my eyes!!!

Uhh... but seriously, it's nice to see something change the pace. I've never really liked the summer, but you make it seem so great.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

hehe,i dont really like summer either but this is nice.there's always that special something that gives someone a relief from all the sorrows.i guess you found yours;p
peace

i could releate to that one that was tight

good job ma!! tired of all that depression shit..good to have sum upliftin shit...keep spittin...fo' real....ill shit.....peace...

Thank you all for the responses. I have never really thought about this topic, seeing as many people find it 'boring' lol...Well I appreciate all the responses. Sorry I haven't been posting much lately! Thankz!!

peAce

it was a plesent and relaxing little piece nice work

Thankz

peAce

This poem brought a *SmIle* to my face!!..cute lil poem gurl nice way to lift everyones spirits from all tha really sad poems that have been posted lately. But yea it was a cool poem...pz and much luv