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Loved or feared I dont 'need-ya-shit
Like 'hitting boards with smarts' my punches 'key-ya-wits'.../
Critics 'Destruct-my-lines', 'Obstruct-my-rhymes', Like 'Workers in thoughts' you still can't 'Construct-my-mind'.../
I 'shadow in night' Like 'Covering-these-Destructers', I'm like 'blocking sex' the way I 'Smother-these-Fuckers'.../
'Disable the spines' like 'Out-placing-backs', Call me 'whack'?, Like 'Lessons in thruth' These critics will soon be 'Now-facing-facts'.../
Im not 'weak' unless you 'miscommnuicate whack and ill', Like 'Night crawling down your shirt' I leave 'Critics-backs-in-chills'.../
f*ck you if you think my lyrics are just 'Playing-games', 'Betraying
Style flip
First Time I Rhymed..in mah Own mah Mind! Mah Lyrics Shyned../
But Destructive Criticism! left me ‘Assed Out’ like a ‘Sharp-Kick-in-the-Behind’../
Had mah Pen-and-Book! The Whole World Shook! Of what I Verbally Lay../
Cats Dissin Mah Game! Showin me Pain! Cuz they say I needed Multis and Wordplay../
I Tried their style! None the Less it just wasn’t what I like to Speak..Fight the Peace../
But they Fight-mah-Piece!! So now all mah Raps can do is Take the Pain and Write-To-Ease../
Mah Heart Broken and Sore!! It Burned mah Insides till It Decay’d Mah Pores../
So Now mah ‘Gun-Shootin-Buzzer Beaters’ cuz I’m bout to ‘Even-the-Score’../
Destructive Criticism is a ‘b^ch’! It Took mah Dreams and Ruin’d-Mah-Life../
Thinkin!! Why am I Movin-wit-Knives..like ‘Sexin Oranges’! When I see these Boys I’m ‘Doin-The-Slice’../
Now mah Tips-Bend’em..when all I wanted was for there ears wit mah Spits-In’Em../
Take theirs and mah Own Life! B-Cuz of Destructive Criticism../
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hahahaha 4 sho...........B.R.E.................this drop was metaphorically Tight................Wordplay was da best part of this Joint...................Hardcore as hell....................Nice shit Fam

uping

This Was good
Keep Spittin that 101 proof

Uppin for My fam

i'm only 12 lol

Yo redragon........Check ur Pm i send u a message

alright

UH OHHH THIS SHIT WAS ILLLL, UPPIN FOR MY B.R.E fam, this was like Bash said, metaphors was tight as hell,1

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

yo nice spit kid yall check out my song cry 2 it notdone but its juss ruff draft gimme opinons aight

hey kid you can write

thanks

Yo did u read that Pm i send u

naw............

Why dawg