first piece in a while...


Life’s Rebellion

A lifetime of lessons
What have I learned?
Years of hard work
What have I earned?
Nothing but a fact
A bit of intelligence
That all side conversation
Has no relevance
There’s the main idea
All else is a waste
Because somehow, someway
We all leave this place
So I ask you now
What is the purpose?
Why do we bother?
When life seems worthless
I find my reason
When I look to the sky
And cry, “Fuck your system”
I won’t live to die…..


let me know wat u think

thas straight .....GhOsT

i think how u structured made the poem really nice to read...

this one would just make u sit and think of life in general and of course the basic questions about it....

i liked this piece..i can relate to it and i think every1 can....but yeah hopin to read more

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thanx for the replies....uppin

still sleepin?

yeah that shit was really tight nice verse