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I will always be alone
IP: F321 1086
I understand I will always be alone/
Therefore my futures predictable not unknown/ Because about 24hours ago I did realise/ That im a ugly fucking fat twat so my demise/ Could only improve the world I know it wont compromise/ Anybody’s jubilation shown so my inevitable elimination/ Might just see to depressions termination/ But will its fucked up determination/ Haunt me during my next shitty life/ Will I once again be forced to sacrifice/ My health just so I can actually once be myself/ But depression has only arrived because I have no wealth/ Shit I cant even afford to pay my rent/ I might aswell surround my feet in a block of cement/ And proceed to drowned in the sea/ So I can then venture forth and go to the holey/ Place in the sky but actually I bet when I die/ I will see my soul disappear then my biggest fear/ Will come true as it goes straight to HELL |
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Tampons are expensive
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IP: EF0A E7B2
hmmm...concept was kinda typical as it may sound but it definitely showed perspectives of what ur trying to say...
the flow is a bit off..vocabs are weak at some points...but hey in poems u just gotta do what u want ..hehe this is the first one ove read from u...hope u to drop more
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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IP: 94C8 0766
Hey Malb, long time no see.
Great poem, strong feelings in it. You've written better before, but this is still great. ~Shalom~ |
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