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Old 06-13-03, 03:43 AM   #1
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1st audio freestyle Dip set anthem instr.

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my 1st audio juss sumthing i put 2gether real fast
gimme sum feed back

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/e...apottsmusic.htm
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Old 06-14-03, 05:56 PM   #2
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Hey Biatch You best change yo fuc*in icon and the song sucks shyt i could spit better on any r o c beat anytime betta then you!!! peace
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Old 06-14-03, 08:49 PM   #3
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Wow .. This Was ..
Weak ..

Flow Was way Off..


Content Was Weak ..

Delivery Was Wack ..

Quality Was Wack ..

You Need Work.
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Old 06-15-03, 02:08 AM   #4
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LoL @ you tryin to sound like jay -z ....

do you kids realize that tere is a fuckin beat there for a reason..........u should just uploaded teh acapella without the beat....

damn

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Old 06-15-03, 09:09 AM   #5
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it needs work. like staying beat and all that the quality didn't sound all that clear either
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Old 06-15-03, 09:00 PM   #6
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yo man u gotta always practice 24-7 man if u wanna get better....
Ure flowin like a dried up river, u got no wordplay , no multis or nothin.... and u goota spit with more presence and energy on the mic...cuz if u dont sound like u init, the listener for sure wont be in it........ but yo take it as a critique not as a diss... everyone gotta start somewhere
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