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Old 06-13-03, 03:36 AM   #1
Jae Cyph
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Grandfather Clock

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[Twas A Topical Battle Vs Mad Mad]

Tik Tik ..

. . . Everything Has A Story To Tell,
But Not The Time To Express It..
. . . But Grandfather Has Time On Hands,
To Teach Us A Lesson..
. . . Grandfather Was A Quiet One,
Kept Everything Locked Inside..
. . . But Grandfather Had The Power,
To Make Events Arise ..
. . . Never Mourning When Death Arose,
Never Suprised When Times Changed..
. . . Tik, Tik, Tik The Only Words Spoken,
When Around Him Conversation Aranged..
. . . Time Is Money,
Grandfather Was Filthy Rich ..
. . . Spent The Fortune On Life,
Not Knowing That He Controled It..
. . . When Time's Were Rough,
He Always Held The Upper-hand..
. . .Seconds, Hours, Minutes Passed,
But No One Would Understand..
. . .Grandfather wasn't Worthless,
The Lesson He Tought Was This..
. . . There's A Time For Everything,
But He's The Only One That Knew It..

Theres' One More Lesson He Taught,
Learned This After Long..
Even After I Died, You Died,
Time Still Goes On..
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Old 06-13-03, 04:34 AM   #2
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Now this was perty nice jay...Very Well written, enjoyed, it, not too long, just good amount, got everything across nicely, what was the topic..Grandfather Clock?? Nice piece...

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Old 06-13-03, 10:39 PM   #3
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Uppin for Jae. . . you know my opinion on this. Dope as fuck.
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Old 06-14-03, 02:18 AM   #4
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Old 06-14-03, 03:25 AM   #5
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this was nice .... i think the finish was the best part... good flow... was hopin for it to be longer .. enjoyed the read .. stay up n droppin `1
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Old 06-14-03, 04:58 PM   #6
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Old 06-14-03, 08:23 PM   #7
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^ok, rookie.
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