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Old 06-16-03, 10:46 AM   #1
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Post freestyle

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dont act like u dont know me cos u look at me like u own me, im the new girl so dont throw me cos im female, and not a homie, im from britain yea ya know me, im the one that slit ur mothas throat on holiday, so dont dis the teen tht can slice u quick its a reject world and i live it bitch.

should i also mention im white too bloodlust bitch and im trapped in ya world. p.s......im comming too.

so u can pretend to hate me i have no crew no back up either just my words and my fingers. hoe
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Old 06-16-03, 11:07 AM   #2
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Re: freestyle

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dont act like u dont know me cos u look at me like u own me, im the new girl so dont throw me cos im female, and not a homie, im from britain yea ya know me, im the one that slit ur mothas throat on holiday, so dont dis the teen tht can slice u quick its a reject world and i live it bitch.

should i also mention im white too bloodlust bitch and im trapped in ya world. p.s......im comming too.

so u can pretend to hate me i have no crew no back up either just my words and my fingers. hoe



Make more rhymes and punch harder. I saw harder bitches.but you'll get there...



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Old 06-16-03, 11:12 AM   #3
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i can write harder but i was in like 10 msn convos as i wrote tht so i wasnt really concentrating. but dun worry next time it will be alot betta ill just switch off everything on my comp and just focus.
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Old 06-16-03, 11:16 AM   #4
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Thugzdocry is a bitch so listen 2 me

i can tell yoa newbie but thats ok, think better subject matter even if its jus a freestyle, think wordplay, think harder punches, Think a lot better vocab especially for a text piece
keep writing tho but

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Old 06-16-03, 11:17 AM   #5
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^^^^^^^^What he said
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Old 06-16-03, 11:57 AM   #6
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Thugzdocry is a bitch so listen 2 me

i can tell yoa newbie but thats ok, think better subject matter even if its jus a freestyle, think wordplay, think harder punches, Think a lot better vocab especially for a text piece
keep writing tho but

Eborted Verdict- U

return the favour and peep http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57908


Yo the bitch here
i did'nt say it sucked......i just that she could put more rhyme in it dawg

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Old 06-16-03, 02:10 PM   #7
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it needs more

add sum shit to it

it'll be tight
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Old 06-16-03, 02:10 PM   #8
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