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06-23-03, 11:47 PM
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That's Right...I'm White
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IP: E7E2 6F94
i Deleted it..
Last edited by Krem : 07-10-03 at 02:39 PM. |
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06-23-03, 11:50 PM
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Lmao.... WeaK Piece , No Vocab , No Multies , and No Wordplay.... Elevate dawg , and U will get Better , Overall You Get a 4/10
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06-23-03, 11:54 PM
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That's Right...I'm White
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IP: E7E2 6F94
haha yeh i'm just mad
my girlfriend dumped me for some guy don't have time to think of big words |
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06-24-03, 12:14 AM
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lol
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06-24-03, 12:19 AM
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violence... and i thought I was violent lol dont worry... i need to improve too
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06-24-03, 01:14 AM
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IP: 734D 6281
Yea like Bash said. Also wasnt feelin the hate towards women in this piece man. Sure ya enraged and all but this wasnt all to good like Kim by Slim Shady.
-Peep my drop: Dear God. -R.x Out |
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06-24-03, 01:33 AM
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That's Right...I'm White
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IP: E7E2 6F94
meh
i don't hate women i just hate that one |
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06-24-03, 01:45 AM
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I didnt like this piece.
but you got the potential to elevate, take time with your thoughts and express them with more feelings, even if your feelings towards something is hate. keep up take the time, and im sure you will become something better then what Ive read. |
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06-24-03, 01:48 AM
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^ One can be one to many. |
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06-24-03, 02:58 AM
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wack.........topic was shit.........ur shit...........vocab was about -10/10..........................over all i'd say 3/10............
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06-24-03, 02:59 AM
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06-24-03, 03:17 AM
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lmao^^^^ yea just stay at it... |
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