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murderous
IP: 4028 CE98
sometimes i spit my rhymez sometimes i spit my gat/ sometimes i spit slugs that manipulate and twist out backs/ my moneys bigger than compost heaps/ if its lookin a little smalla im puttin holes in ya jeep/ fuck wit me/ its da sea where u creep/ cuz i schedule my victims and its dat time of da week/ lets role play u b me and i b u/
u in hawaii and im in i c u/ im a vaccine u da flu/ im hitler and u da jew/ i know my style's intimidati'n/ ya favorite rapper comes on afta me and u change da station/ niggaz step up like my gun dont blast/ think its funny? try me ya fun wont last/ i'll have u turned from flesh 2 ash/ present 2 past/ have ya layin on ya ass fertilizin' da grass/ BITCH! IM MURDEROUS!!!!!!!!! |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yo on some thugg shit this was on point with a bullet not to many cats use this style anymore on open mic but you peaced it well togeather.
peep my peace called battlen myself |
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IP: C2C2 09EB
The Way You Structure This Was Wack, You Need More Complex Vocab, Better Flow!
Try To Add Some Multi's In There Too, Overall: Needs Alot Of Work But keep Elevatin! 4/10 |
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