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07-07-03, 01:55 PM | #1 | |||||||
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New Shit... Peep this and tell me whachu think
IP: 4577 CD9A
Aiyyo check this out nigga...
Ima make this shit quik so get off my dick And quit startin bullshit and tha gun wont click// Rap Battles? Nah nigga I rip niggaz for fun I make them leave cryin to let u know that Im done// Elevatin? Yea nigga Ima keep that in mind But none of these mahfuckas are "Hard 2 Find"// ppl say I got a style like "D.R.E." but I stay tryin'a get wit "B.R.E."// Vocab? Nah nigga I havent updated It always stay underrated or overhated// Complexity? I dunno what dat is but u can swallow dat shit like its my jizz// Every girl I know say Ima be da next "50" Im not a snitch though but I'll write sumthin nifty// My ratings? Now thats unknown for now until Im on tv and rippin up "Lil Bow Wow"// My flows stay wit a fundamental play but everyday is just an "Elemental" day// I write gangsta like cause thats my life And tha next woman I take will be my wife// Clubs? Yea nigga I hit da hot spots Like "DJ Coop" mixin wit latina hots// "DJ Toosheezy" gets all da breezies This is sum tight shit for all my neezies// U catch a quik one and end up wit a bruise Top story "11 News" wit "Della Crews"// I dont need "Anger Management" for my anger needs I need a blonde and a false foot like "Mr. Deeds"// U niggaz need to back up or meet tha shotty I'll have u all spread out like shit in a potty// I base my life on a "Ghetto Story" but treat U niggaz like "Nothin" like im dat nigga "N.O.R.E."// My "Pride and Glory" is tha only way for me to succeed and get to tha place I wanna stay// And thats in tha rap game wit all this fame and not be put to shame and look like a lame// I can give u a buzz like a sour "Shock Tart" then die so u can "Kickstart My Heart"// New Vocab, More Elevatin, and Complexity Now Ima make like "Tom Vercetti" and go to "Vice City" End It.... |
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07-07-03, 02:00 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: CEF5 716F
datz da best shit ive heard outta u eva
it all fitz n flowz n it all workz good shit keep it up |
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07-07-03, 02:09 PM | #3 | ||||||
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<Gangsta One stares in amazment> Whoa........................that was the dopest shi' I have ever seen!!!!!!!!
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07-07-03, 02:21 PM | #4 | |||||||
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shut the fuck up gangsta one, you cock suckin bell end, come and finish of our battle you fuck
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07-07-03, 02:27 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
No freepostin man... Uppin for feedback
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07-07-03, 02:47 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: F595 20FD
wasent feelin this at all, so babdly stands out u tryin ta be somin ya aint
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07-07-03, 02:50 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Actually Im not tryna be nothin. Its just a flow. Just cause u wanna stand out wit ur shit dont mean everybody else has to. But if ur shit so good, how come u aint on tv or nothin? Or u dont have an answer... If not, then shut up and run along and have fun battlin and postin. Uppin for feedback still.
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07-07-03, 02:52 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: F595 20FD
g u cant take critique, dont fuckin post iight, their was no feelin on dis piece, no wordplay, muiltis,metas or anythin else. period
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07-07-03, 02:53 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
i dont agree with any of them
i think you iight ...sound kindalikajuggalo but its iight that shyt you spit keep spittin nigga |
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07-07-03, 02:54 PM | #10 | |||||||
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Yea Ima keep dat up and Zainy, i was just postin sum factual questions thats all. I can take it. If i couldnt I wouldve been gone from this site. Think about it.
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07-07-03, 02:55 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: F595 20FD
man i just left BRE lmao, u get in easy
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07-07-03, 02:57 PM | #12 | |||||||
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It doesnt matter about gettin in easy. And whats that suppose to mean anyway? And Quit freepostin. Uppin.....
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07-07-03, 03:00 PM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: F595 20FD
iight 1 more cus u asked a q, BRE will let ya in easy, they got some of da best emcee's but aint a real crew.
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07-07-03, 03:02 PM | #14 | |||||||
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O ok. Well aight. Uppin.
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07-07-03, 04:33 PM | #15 | ||||||
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Expand on the lines n stuff so u can fit everythin u wanna say in.
Also try to leave the films, games other artists, tv programmes out, its ok usin like 1 a peice but if u throw so many in it looks like a bit immature reflection on u, which is cool if thats what ur style is or whatever. Oh, and flow was a bit choppy at times but mines shit too but you can always work on it man keep posting one day u'll hit the high note. |
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