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Old 07-09-03, 03:16 PM   #1
HellRaizor
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this was written to my special someone feedback only

IP: DEBF A39D

its you im thinking of in the beginning and end of the day
its you that understands each of my problems in many different ways
its you that i get into arguements with over trials and tribulations
its you that i know through the day for me has been waitin
its you that i cant really express words how i feel
its you that only i can think of has been with me in so many ordeals
its you that through this short time has helped me grow as person
its you that i know if im hurtin im automatically gettin your concern
its you that since you started talking to me your trips to the mall
have lessend
its you that i know im doing some right to have you as my blessing

she got me feelin all soft dont it get it twisted you will get merked in a battle, im just showin some versatility

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Old 07-11-03, 11:13 PM   #2
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^^^Indeed.

Well straight from the heart, simple and to the point of what you feel.

And i'm thinking that's what you wanted. To get it onto paper in a way that pleased you in a personal way.

..nothing more to say. Nice piece (oh!)...

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