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1st Rhyme give me sum feedback
IP: 1908 5BEC
Step aside/u dont wanna collide/u can run but u cant hide/im bout to start i riot/grab Emcees and eat um for my diet/u cats is all punchlines/i ll eat u cats for lunch time/i strike down on u like thunder/its a wonder i havent put u 6' feet under/im a convict u cus im the jury and the judge/u think u packin heat but ur really packin fudge/people come from all around to hear me speak/to get a sneak peak/and watch me add one more to ur losing streak/
but i dont rap to be funny/ i dont rap for the money/im so rich i need protection/ got so much dough i could give u a yeast infection/(get it)fake rappers wearin fake platnium bitch ill give you a smack/steal ur chain and make you buy it back/ but the only thing smaller than yo dick is your paper stack/....so when u battle me u betta give it ya most im a kill u then make fun of ya ghost/. |
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IP: 399E F0FD
ok 2 things
1. Write Your rhymes// like this from// now on cuz its so much// easier to read// 2. Actually rap ABOUT something, done say random shit that rhymes |
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IP: B029 7B15
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