your life can be gone in one breathe/
your one breathe away from a death so live it to the fullest/
you have plenty of time to be dead so dont leave it messed/
your life is like a test seeing what you can overcome/
are you gonna get a good job or be a bum/
cause bums smoke and get drugged up with cocaine/
blows your head and leaves you all messed up like you have no brain/
Bums just have no cash and they end up sleepin on the streets in trash/
you cant think and you start to shiver/
if you keep doin that your life will be quicker/
itll be gone in a flash like a flash light/
you better start workin cause yo rhymes aint tight/
so you think youll throw away everything that you had/
actin all sad so why dont you bitch make it fuckin better/
make it good and be a trend setter for younger people that look up to you/
dont make your life all screwed cause youll lose/
cause it will just give you more bad news/
so keep your head up and dont look down/
dont make shit or you wont be around/

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It doesnt matter if you win as long as you give everything in your heart

- michael jordan

I am gonna be what i wanna be, but not just what i wanna be but what i am.

- 2hot2handle(myself)

aight, that shit was EXTREMELY basic, u need to put some word-play in it, aight u did have some but :

itll be gone in a flash like a flash light/

is WAY to simple, change tha flash light wit a camera or sumtin, jus keep workin and keep takin advice and puttin it in ur flow u'll get somewhere...

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