Drop it Sheff!

Ok...

I'm nice, I'm the type to just glide over a beat
You're a fag, you're the type to ride a bike without a seat//
How you gonna call me out
But that's cool, you'll be my first//
Victim but listen
So I can drop you in my verse//
So here you go ELEETE
You're lookin sorta sweet in your drag dress//
And you're not in New Edition
So give it a rest with your fag vest//
But you know like I do
You askin for it and I'm bringing pain//
So show some SOUL FOR REAL and sing the hook from Candy Rain

aight then
listen up......

ima killa disease
youll understand what i mean//
touch me one time and ill devour your spleen//
ill declare invasion
mind and body seperation//
take you over like a virus and cause contamination//
ill stimulate your membrane
causing you pain//
invadin yo head so i can fuckin rupture your brain//
like a demon witta purpose
otherwise im worthless//
ima mortician witta bag full o' corpses//
these bags full o' corpses
ima fillem wit horse heads//
pay attention to the plot while it thickens and worsens//
i know you scarred you pussy
everyone knows that you wack//
so fuck you and all yo kitty cat raps!//
bitch

So you're a disease then, right?
Or a gay butt demon at night//
Or a virus that seeps
Out of a penis in green and bright white//
Regardless, dog, look, whatever you are
You're retarted and my rhymes got you shook by far//
I know you're going to talk shit
Say I brought out the ghost in you//
But what's a fag with a bag
Full of horse heads going to do//
Give it a rest, before I do it for you
And you know what I mean//
And get your mouth off of my dick
That's not the way to get my spleen...
Bitch...

the only fag that i see is the one this page//
your wack flow aint enough to bring you to the battlin stage//
cause it doesnt matter, its the point you been missin//
cause my flows' a bitch slap when i spit you listen//
i splice cells while im burnin hell//
cock the gun back and start spittin the shells//
you pissed me off, i never wanted to fight you//
you gayer than that kid they used to make fun of in high school//
you must think im trippin, for the shit that im spittin//
im spittin this cause the shit that im sippin//
its called alcohol so knock it off//
cause you bout to get served a cocktail witta molotov//
you can call me a liar but im startin this fire//
shoot at both sides and see you stand in the crossfire//
so dont test me if you never met me//
your weak ass rhymes aint been used effectively//

thats it.............

The only fag's on this page?
You mean the one that you typed?//
And you think you hittin hard
But all you're spittin is hype//
Your raps are like a JaRule CD
Without all the singin//
Think about it dog...
It's only fuckin' silence you're bringin//
Alcohol, huh?
So drop the fuckin bottle and fight//
I'll leave you starin at the celing
In the hospital tonight//
Your weak raps aint shit
And quit with the science references Dexter,//
You been playin too much Metroid
And you just failed the semester...//
And about that kid
They made fun of in high school//
Like eminem said...
Come to think about it, it WAS YOU.//
I think you're done now
I've thoroughly addressed all of your issues//
But hey, go check your mailbox
Because I sent you some tissues!

I know you'll be using them too BITCH!

um yea......this is not how a battle works but wutever sounds cool

follow the rulz.-insert

+_o

__________________
<center>
<img src="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=9076&stc=1"</img>
<A Href="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111987">t</a>
We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

So how does it work then? What are the fuckin rules? I just joined today... So what's the format or whatever...?

???

i guess this little fagget kid still wants to play
i guess sometimes, you have to learn the hard way//
this hip hop, ima bring it down to the roots
cut yo tongue off an serve it on a platter of fruits//
you dont need to be rhymin, you wack pussy bitch
go back to yo street corner and keep suckin some dick//
so listen, no ones feelin all the shit you about
i dont go to your job kickin dicks out yo mouth//
i guess im demented, when im ejaculatin this semen
left her creamin, fucked yo girl an left her screamin//
you know you feelin my rhymes from yo mind to yo feet
you blind, but you knowin the name is ELEETE//
you met your defeat, so quit mentionin me
you witnessed the rhyme that is meltin the beat//
bitch!!

i guess this little fagget kid still wants to play
i guess sometimes, you have to learn the hard way//
this hip hop, ima bring it down to the roots
cut yo tongue off an serve it on a platter of fruits//
you dont need to be rhymin, you wack pussy bitch
go back to yo street corner and keep suckin some dick//
so listen, no ones feelin all the shit you about
i dont go to your job kickin dicks out yo mouth//
i guess im demented, when im ejaculatin this semen
left her creamin, fucked yo girl an left her screamin//
you know you feelin my rhymes from yo mind to yo feet
you blind, but you knowin the name is ELEETE//
you met your defeat, so quit mentionin me
you witnessed the rhyme that is meltin the beat//
bitch!!

I SAY DRAW BOTH HAD A VERSE THEN A WEAK ONE SO ON SO FORTH YOU NEED TO ACCUMILATE ONE VERSE OF THIS AND THEN POST

Uppin for votes.......................


First time.................


Drop that feedback..................

tsheff112 had this his hits were harder simple as that....he spent less time biggin up how he was good and more lines with punches.....

good flows though I liked it.....

On the real i felt that ELEETE had this all the way.........yo T you did a good job but ima have to disagree with XL......ELEETE's flow went smooth everytime, T i felt that you fell off the rhyme scheme and creativeness a couple times.......Yo T i like some of your punchlines but it seems like everytime you were tryin just a bit too hard.........no disrespect but ELEETE flow sounded like he had more of a vocab to attack wit........all in all it was good both yall....props! Holla if you wanna battle? peace

FAVORITE LINES
TSHEFF112:
The only fag's on this page?
You mean the one that you typed?//
And you think you hittin hard
But all you're spittin is hype//

ELEETE
cause it doesnt matter
its the point you been missin//
cause my flows' a bitch slap
when i spit you listen//