Yo u bitch u really fukked up this time
U werent a chick i'd smack cept now i'll just write this rhyme
Lies were the only thing ur skanky ass ever told
My stupid ass bit, everyword that u sold
Fukk u, I hate u, oh i dont like him fukk that
U wack bitch, week after we take a brake ur hittin for the wall
Takin a crack at the fukker who u always said nothin was there
Fukk u bitch ill kill without feeling any remourse of dispare
U lied to me after 19 months u fukkin cunt
I hope u rot in hell for this shit, in ur face i spit
Don't ever approach put ur life to a quit
Ur a slutty ass bitch just a cunt rag
I wish this clip was full i shoot you with this mag
U fukked up real good i hope u know wat uve begun
I'll beat u to a bloody pulp till all ur life is gone
I killed you and i dont feel one bit bad or sad
Come to think of it bitch im almost feeling glad
I can't wait till u take ur last breath and walk to the shadow of death
Cuz u aint nothin but a two timin bitch
All hate here, u nothin but a witch
I hate you with every bit of my heart and soul
I can't believe all the parts of my heart you stole
You unbelievable, fukkin said u'd love me forever
Its been 7 days now ur like watever
I just needed some fukkin time to sort shit out
But now i now ur a slut without a shadow of a doubt
Ur new little friend if i see him again ill curb stomp his face
I rip out his skull, leave him bloody in disgrace
Hope u dont ever see me in a back alley soon cuz u'll be visitin ur dead relatives
I hope ur neck is the first part of ur body that gives
Cuz then ull be paralized waiting for a stompin
Was that bitch really worth mackin and rompin
Ur dead bitch ur dead listen to the words that are said
Straight up bitch ur dead ill bust u in ur head and fill ur new b/f with LEAD

PEACE

This is to many skanky ass whore ex-gf. We took a break cuz i needed some time cuz i just started college. Now the bitch is mackin on a kid that has been tryin for over a year. She always told me nothin was goin on and today i see her at the mall flirtin like mad crazy with the fukker then tonight she's at a dudes house when i call her to confront her bout this shit. We dated for 19 months and in 7 days she is pulling this shit. I was ready to reconsider but fukk that bitch. Give me some INSIGHT PEACE OUT

yeh man!
fuck her, i had basically the same problem
but i got over it
got me a new girl now
so it's all good

anyway, the rhyme was good, i could feel the anger that you put in it,

peace!

oh and check out my latest piece
it's called "I"ll Never Quit"

fuck her...and I mean that in as many wayz as possible...lol...nice rhyme but the multiez and vocab could use a lil' work...good flow though...keep elevatin'...

they r right that was hot and u do got some skill i could also see the anger u put in it but yeah every guy goes through that actually i went through the exact same thing with my fioncee i though she cared but she was after the money u know how triflen ass hoe's b well shit i hope every thing works out
im out
peace man
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ya thanx for the reply i didnt want much vocab just wanted it short and sweet if u know wat i mean thanx for the feedback this poem made me feel way better anyways hit this battle with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5646#post755646

that was good your vocab was prity good, i really liked ur concept

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Yeah man, fuck that shit, push her down some staris... That's about what I want to do to my ex-cock whore. Yo good piece and I can see that you just want to fucking smack the shit out of her. I feel that shit. Good and simple.... I like this drop.

Check out my latest drop in Open Mic called "She's gone now" and hit this shit up, it's gettin slept on like a fucking bunk bed:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77723

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please go vote

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tight ass drop, came with great intencity, the vibe was ill great drop homie peace

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