the last release from my text album enjoy this and other peices at www.geocities.com/raven420_ca/album.htm

i caused some shit now i got a week down here in solidarity/
confined to the thoughts in my own mind i'm a lose sanity/
random ripples of wicked thoughts headaches i wish it'd stop/
remember the first time i got into serious trouble with a cop/
13 yrs old being stupid wanted to play basketball late night/
so i broke into the arena and was gonna play until it got light/
but my freind was stupid smashing one too many windows/
the cops came about the noise and so started my life's woes/
that 'freind' quickly become one of my biggest lifetime foes/
day in and out we would clash as leaders of the school yard/
groups almost gangs in toe i had someone with me to gaurd/
i only fought him i remember when weapons were first used/
the start of high school we were sick of being verbaly abused/
he brought a gak but i had something a little more powerful/
he lunged at me i emptied the magazine it had started full/
the blood spilled l the kids were all screaming it was crazy/
now i'm here in a room all alone in a big state penetenary/
i stabbed a man at the cafeteria with my broken tooth brush/
this had started with me and my freind looking for a rush/

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

no affence but i wasnt reall feelijn that...had some good lines but seemed really basic..im basic 2...but i think you can elavate...so keep droppin man...an put some more heat into it..later

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

uppin

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

last up

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

one more up for fun

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league