anyone who wants it
is welcome to come and get it
and just in case ya missed it
Bre's back bitch don't get it twisted



these words i spit defy both rhyme and reason
my mind defines space time and changing seasons
elvations on hold talent leve is peaking
foundations is shaking on RB so i ain't leaving
i serve slurs occured on this platter of expectation
no hype needed Baddest Rapperz Effects next generation
i heard the whispers about Bre becoming complacent
but face it these aces were biding time smoked in tha basement
so strap on ya boots ya gear and then take ten paces
we're about to destroy what's left of this hip hop nation


anyone who wants it
is welcome to come and get it
and just in case ya missed it
Bre's back bitch don't get it twisted


i think ill thoughts which spill offa my tongue
i've scaled the ladder of success you're still on tha bottom rung
fuck wit us bitch we'll have ya turning tricks
i'll overshadow ya skill like the sun during a full eclipse
i came fully equipped wit tongue and lips
to rip the mic degrade a dyke and spit it sicc
so think twice before deciding to beef wit Bre
we got cats that'll Kurse ya crew Mentally
the past lays behind us we're forging ahead
you're left in tha dust choking on words we said


anyone who wants it
is welcome to come and get it
and just in case ya missed it
Bre's back bitch don't get it twisted

YO THAT WAS VISIOUS A LIL SHORT BUT ILL NONE THE LESS IENJOYED IT AND WOULD LIKE AN EXTENDED VERSION.

^^^yup...you rep ya crew well young one...lol...but yeah..this was dope...just extend it a little and it will be dope-er...lol...I like the way that you managed to incorperate Mentally Ill (BRE'z Leader) within the verse too...that was hot...

yo that was some hot shit, but like they said if u put one or two more verses on this thread itll be even nicer, keep it up man..out

like the groupie i am i have to agree with them...
this was good, the flow was easy, the vocab was there, little lacking on the multies but none the less it was hot

I might have to bite this idea and make something about IJL... if i do ill make sure to say u did it 1st... but ill do it better...lol

good drop!

if you have a sec (open mic)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134

yea i was feelin this man good flow metas and consistancy rep it lol

good spit..short but ill...everything was there an ya end line was cool..i liked that dust talk..it was tight..good piece keep an eye out for ye other stuff peace

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Yeah this was a good peice, good read too, your flow was good i thought, your vocab was good, could use some more multies but its cool, but overall id say it was a good peice, keep dropping

that was a pretty tight peice. i was feelin the flow, vocab, and wordplay the most, but i do agree wit masta c u could use some more multis, but the verse was still kool. overall that was a good post, so keep postin and elevatin man, i enjoyed readin that.

peace.....