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Im gonna make it
IP: F217 10F6
one day im gonna make it
niggers talk shit to me but i wont take it niggers think becuz im white im not tight but this ill cat is gonna rock da mic i represent my klan show u who da man cuz no one can rock da mic like i can i got potential to blow up my rhymes are so ill u will want to throw up i make da illest rapper look like a peice of shit my 'nuts' must be 'diseasd' cuz i always 'cum sick' im gonna make it one day, i cant wait and i am gonna set the record straight |
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Ok...Use some multies...and try not to rhyme with the same ending but it happens some times lol...and use some internals to help support the flow and it makes it flow better...up your vocab...structure needs some work too....but keep elavating...and you will get better...and keep dropping.
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