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alrite this whole open mic is bout a gurl...that ive been checkin...and she feelin me back...but shes got a bf..his names kyle..my names kyle...ya ya...(so u can get a view of it) they aint workin...im takin her wit me (cuz thats the way it should be)\also we've dated 2 b4...but we was younger (so it was childish didnt work)thts in the chorus ya...ull get it

2 new experiences brings you,but somethings i wish i could un-do/
ur decisions is fine/but somethin bout u sends shivers down my spine/
i cant help to stare/i can't bare 2 share u..juss isnt fair/
trap'd emotions hard 2 take-it/ur the one i been lookin 4, i couldnt fake-this/
like middle school somethins couldnt clutch/like i can look but i cant touch/
friends can tell jokes like kyle timez two/but i only wat one me and one u/
i find it hard 2 believe im in ur sight/i wanna have u in my arms.now and every night/
flowers on ya bed 2 remind u of ne day/2 make it ez.i stay quiet but i got plenty 2 say/

short Chorus*
2 years and 2 timez now things spark and theres 2 guyz 2 stories and 2 sides/

we couldnt get thingz 2 sit well/ive been in the dark with no luv stories and nothin 2 tell/
last past weekz...h.s starts and thingz back-up like a ticket 2 hell/
u showin up was a tru greetings/im sry im puttin u on the spot, but it was a great thing..us meeting/
tried 4 some time now 2 get u alone/still i dont get 2 talk 2, much not even over tha phone/
i realize u need time 2 think/but i admit i stare 4 some timez eyes waterin 4 gettin 2 blink/
gurl theres somethin there i can feel-it/my hearts been tamper'd with ur the one 2 heel-it/
its time i step up, and prove ill be ur-man////and take ur breath away so u cant stand/
sometimes i ? my self am i sure/but wen i think i cant get it out of my head the site of her/
ive always liked u/juss how it is/but feelins R tough she takin in that and this/
u kno im there for you wen ever u need-2-be-sure/glad 2 be by urside cuz u deserve it thats how he should have treat'd-her/

short chorus*(repeat)
2 years and 2 timez now things spark and theres 2 guys 2 stories and 2 sides/

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this was a good topic and a good flow. i liked the vocab and it flowed very well.

my favorite line
flowers on ya bed 2 remind u of ne day/2 make it ez.i stay quiet but i got plenty 2 say/

by the way= hope you get the gurl

holla at yo boi
~1~

^^thanx dawg

i hope'n 2....but she still my babygurl either way..

thanx 4 the feed..back

some more would be great

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UPPIN 4 SOME MORE FEED BACK

GREATLY APPRECIATED

PEACE

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ok, flow was good....vocab was decent, content was good....overall it was a nice drop...i was feeling it...stayed on topic the whole time and i felt what ya was saying...keep droppin and i hope shit works out for you and the girl...

o yea if you get a chance could you check out my latest open mic. i could use some more feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83967