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...::Frozen Hearts::...
IP: 3F03 EF03
Never felt the warmth of the radiance of another person
What was it that constantly made all the lovers divertin? Away from her was the only place where love ever stood Only the ashes of relationships laid like her love was wood Could she ever love with all this frozen ice on her heart? Needed to get an ice axe and axe the ice for love to start The ice stopped her and dropped her to be a part of love Never wanted to be a house wife but to be a tart at pubs Emotions tugs..Devotion to love is all she ever wants now The ice is seen on the exterior and everybody just frowns Now she wants that crown that her daddy used to give her ..''My little Princess''.. Is all she ever thinks about while her emotions grows bigger To hold another figure..Because now maths just wouldn't do The only words that came out of her fragile mouth was..I do Very few's affection made a connection with her frozen soul Left all alone but this bitter warmth will never go on its own So she was thrown.. And smashed up these icicled feelings For her passion of effection to be let free without sheilding |
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Pleas, Not the teeth...!!
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IP: 3354 DAC6
damn man....uv elevated....
vocab especialy..!!! lol need i say more... ohh....ill topic....EVERY man can relate to this shit...stayed well on it.... GREAT READ MAN....Dopeness |
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IP: 2D46 820F
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IP: 19AF 50C1
VERY EASY TO RELATE EVEN WITH A MORE COMPLEX TEXT WHICH VERY GOOD.YOU ESCENTUATED YOUR MEANING AND IMAGRY EASILY IN MERE WORD USAGE AND ANYONE CAN RELATE TO THE EMOTION EFFECTION AND SO FORTH,,,,,,,
THIS WAS A HELL ILL READ POP. |
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IP: 3051 A36A
^^^i have nothing more to add what they havent...nive stuff just uppin it so more folks can read....i preferred this to what u dropped just before(forgot the name lol)......whiole verse was sound so if you want me to show you the lines i liked....
Never felt the warmth of the radiance of another person What was it that constantly made all the lovers divertin? Away from her was the only place where love ever stood Only the ashes of relationships laid like her love was wood Could she ever love with all this frozen ice on her heart? Needed to get an ice axe and axe the ice for love to start The ice stopped her and dropped her to be a part of love Never wanted to be a house wife but to be a tart at pubs Emotions tugs..Devotion to love is all she ever wants now The ice is seen on the exterior and everybody just frowns Now she wants that crown that her daddy used to give her ..''My little Princess''.. Is all she ever thinks about while her emotions grows bigger To hold another figure..Because now maths just wouldn't do The only words that came out of her fragile mouth was..I do Very few's affection made a connection with her frozen soul Left all alone but this bitter warmth will never go on its own So she was thrown.. And smashed up these icicled feelings For her passion of effection to be let free without sheilding ....bloah...all nice.......1 1 |
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