Treated Unforgiven Praying 4 A Change
There's only so much I can take that much is plain
Mininimizing the madness to maintain my sanity
Searching for hidden blessings behind my calamityz
Seeing nothing but hard times since I was juvenile
When I was out of control living an addicts lifestyle
Born into poverty and brought up a nobody native
Give what I can to my caught up homies incarcerated
Pondering at the void left after Mackavelli's departure
RIP Big Pun Big L Biggie and JMJ no other cats is larger
I love cats who do it for love man fuck getting ducatz
No time to get my weight up I'm busy raising ruckus
Keeping true means never losing my respect on the street
Seeking love give me more than just a peck on the cheek
Hot grrrl on the regular
Phone sexy on the cellular
Ever since I got good sex tattooed on the kitten
Don't tell me where to get in I'm like fuck tryna fit in
Wanna call me outcast I'll tell you what
Does it look like I give a fuck?

I've been thinking of adding to this and putting it on audio. The last 6 lines are irregular I'd probably make them the hook...Let me know what you think...what you liked...what you would change...etc

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i agree that the last lines would be good for the hook, i thought it had a decent theme and good rhyming structure, with nice vocab and feeling put into it......keep droppin it..........see ya!