Bracket breaker, a Savior symbol, utilization of the Pais soldier/
A Creator's demeanor rests where a Cross bleeder's ice pick met the cold shoulder/
And it shattered, millionth piece scattered to Babel Tower point/
And Disillusionment happily presented his Power Point demolition strategy/
Broken piston tragedy, call me Pillow Face, a single tear restarts the process/
Obliteration of everything adjacent, a boat of two's opened up promise/
The road less taken, I'll let you do your own thing, but I'll be around/
Bolt action backfired, lodged a stick in my eye, and kicked me when I'm down/
Pacifists, hypocrits, peity, literalists, and society can't find the faith man has stashed/
Abandoned a long time ago. Sitting at my right is a punctured heart, far to the left rests the trash/

Love's sword and shield can't defend me from humanity....
So I nail myself for symbolism, and dangle from insanity....

Love's sword and shield can't defend me from humanity....
So I nail myself for symbolism, and dangle from insanity....

interesting short piece
couldnt pick up on some of the sentences and their meanings but i liked the way it was written...kind of abstract
and the hook at the end was a good touch to it

Thanks....upping

i didnt like it , it seemed to much like aesop rock to me, im just not into that abstract stuff, so i dont know what i could tell you to make it better,

but your good at what you do, im sure people that like that abstract shit would like this, but i wont try to change your style, ...uh, just do what you do i guess