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Old 11-02-03, 05:12 PM   #1
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KEMYST
SAL THE KING
MONSTAR......I REPLIED TO ALL THEIR NEW ISHES


im everything you want to be.thats an m.c.-
the only reason we in the same division is cause your half of me.
my brain waves migrate-like mexicans immigrate-
across to territorial states.
murder those who hate-in slang editorial your just fake.
name any name he garbage if i diss him-
90 percent of his trash is enough to ruin the ecosystem.
it only takes one time so if i said it wont be repeated-
but i can leave you repeatedly deleted-and defeated-
im like the holes in the equator when im heated.
i have to eat m.c.'s...since my food rations are depleted.
your flame saint hot that shit dont even singe me lyrically-
my flows saltwater that drown you in my in~SaLTs (insult) to injury.
devour rappers-turn your hardest lyricist to cowards-
my brain storms rejister as meteor showers.

can i rock? yeah but id rather not.

instead i spit tidle waves,tsunami's,mansoons and typhoons-
when they "land" leaving 2/3rds of this earth water consumed.
my every writ leaves text dripped and ignited like a gasoline dip-
take m.c.'s to the point of flatline then burry them under it.
kill in plain dialect but murder in neosandscript-
you get rip in the middle like the word stRIPped.
its never enough till every body gets fucked stuck or stuffed-
the only way im taking an (L) is when im getting puffed.
im one of the nicest,one of the tightest-
you couldnt send me an ill line if you emailed me averse with a virus.
i'll never go platinum and what?-dont front.
you go plat but the fact is you wouldnt come of the top with a haircut.
this aint luck its skills but you cant fathom cause you suck.
its like having sex with a retard.... you just dumb fuck.
your concept of rap os all wrong- your talent is all gone-
plus your format seams like it was barrowed from a country song.
want free advice? then dont test-one of the best-
your shits all relative like you sucked from the breast of insest.

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Old 11-02-03, 06:39 PM   #2
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uppin
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Old 11-02-03, 06:42 PM   #3
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Dawg..

Check new rules..and follow them..

Else i must close this = )
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Old 11-02-03, 07:12 PM   #4
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MY BUST TWIN I GOT YOU
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Old 11-02-03, 07:25 PM   #5
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Good shit though...

Flowed on point...

Wordplay was raw...

Vocab expandance good...

Keep em coming...
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Old 11-02-03, 11:11 PM   #6
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Everything came through in this piece...
Flow was there...
Basically everything Gothika said...


Syn
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Old 11-02-03, 11:13 PM   #7
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every time i come back online you've pumped out anotha one!! tight shit!
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Old 11-03-03, 09:24 AM   #8
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Raw is a good way to explain this thread... but I was thinking more like crude, loathsome, grimy shit that would strip a bitch from all remaining dignity

Strong open

"im everything you want to be.thats an m.c.-
the only reason we in the same division is cause your half of me"

Clever

"i'll never go platinum and what?-dont front.
you go plat but the fact is you wouldnt come of the top with a haircut.
this aint luck its skills but you cant fathom cause you suck.
its like having sex with a retard.... you just dumb fuck"

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"kill in plain dialect but murder in neosandscript-
you get rip in the middle like the word stRIPped"

I'ma PM you the idead of that verse for the collabo... Peace
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Old 11-03-03, 12:25 PM   #9
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Aiyyo WP, collab wit me son. i'm tryna develop new styles and blends an shit and i'm tryin ta understand how you write whatcha write...
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Old 11-03-03, 04:35 PM   #10
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YO IM GLAD EVERYONE LIKED THIS AND KEYS IF YOU WANT COLLAB JUST PM ME I NEVER TURN DOWN A COLLAB
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Old 11-03-03, 07:21 PM   #11
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First post up in here in a while and its good to see theres still sum quality floating around. Ya shit was nice it flowed nicely for the most part though I was lost on sum of it. Ya vocab was good I aint got no problems there. Maybe ya rhyme scheme coulda been a bit more interesting but thats just cos its a text.

anyway hit me up on mine lucid blackness return the favour peace
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Old 11-04-03, 06:11 PM   #12
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thnks uppin
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