Victim #1

A retired individual revelling in his golden days
A solitary man settling into comforts phase
Harmless age former postal worker slash Messenger
Silver innocence crowned this heads aggresor
So as he strolled with mans best friend I followed
Within woods camouflage I performed a hollow
Grabbed him with leather fingers of righteous
I looked beyond his scared sight into a sector for lifeless
Tree branches lowered in silence to secret my deed
The dogs dyslexic wagging tail agreeing my planned soul relief
Not guilty!Sacrificial trade Golden days ended by a jugular silver blade

Victim #2

A single whoreish mother struggling to cope with forged troubles
For every child conceived her waterfall eyes doubled
Now bereft of lovers she squalored in a cess pit of stench
The ramshackled abode absorbed her strength born by rent
A thatched pale face attached to a skinny frail frame
So as she sat in suns porch I shortened the terrain
Now I laid claim dragging her flailing torso in doors
I looked beyond her blank stare into young lifeless thoughts
Muffled her with a glove and twisted a vengeance edge
Erased her soul while that old dog wagged with her death
The shacks walls whispered a promise to remain silent
Windows and doors shut to contain the violence
Not Guilty!Sacrificial trade encaved by a rusty roofs omen of blade

Victim #3

A youngster raised in a home battered by dads rage
There was no escape so he dwelt on hates smiling façade
Turned 18 and evicted himself from his only family
A humble street bum so sad to see but he had the audacity to leave
Now resident to a rat ridden alley way society prison
Scarcly covered in rags his shivering self struggled for livin
His eyes closed I approached the dirty bricked slumber
Unrestrained his lids flickered with colds discomfort
I looked beyond the tired eyes into a family of sins
Behind rusted bins I slipped a sliver of steel within
But I saw no wagging dog his tail was lowered and still
He trotted away from view whining with guilt
Guilty?Sacrificial trade dithered on fate and was torn by haste

After all is it so bad to end a child abusers presence?
After all is so bad to end a child murdering parent?
But then again…mistakes do happen u learn from a lesson
Guilt edged the boys death who killed his violent
fathers temper who beat him since he can remember…..

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WOW..

damn... i like your flow and how you took on some heavy subjects
defintly some good shit

any other replies other than 'some dope shit!'?

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