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11-06-03, 06:05 PM
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RENEGADE (remix)
IP: C1DA C961
ay yall i wrote this to the beat of JAY-Z and EMINEM's RENEGADE but its not done and im lookin for someone to collab with so PM me if ya wanna (u'll need 2 verses).
the three open mics i posted on were: Slicad3nu- da fall of a great man A2Z- Scetchbook Of Rain Synical- Synical Ego I’m the only rapper my age that’s classified as urban// Disturbin, my whole generations methods of learnin// But I cant help it if I’m far further intriguing// Than a bunch a dickheads have our youth completely misleading// Pleading and bleeding// dragged around kicking and screaming// Drownin in the hazards of dreaming// they beg us to keep reading// When actually my blood has been heating// my spinal fluids been leaking// Hunched over everybody’s critiquing// gimme some feedback |
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11-06-03, 06:28 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
ay yall gimme some feedback, come on yall.......
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11-06-03, 06:39 PM
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IP: 136B EA53
Ok Alpha here I give you big ups on this 1 b-cuz you aint just talkin bout beef shit you talkin bout how you hold yo self up dont let nobody stop you from what you doin keep droppin kid -1-
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11-06-03, 06:42 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
thanks to the ALPHA for the feedback, want some more tho, keep em comin and if any one is down for my collab thing lemme know through PM
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11-06-03, 08:46 PM
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IP: F78C 74DC
that's hot. i like the way it pieces together. if you still lookin for someone to work with hit me up and we'll see if you tryin to colab. hold it down
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11-07-03, 02:54 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
ay that shit was tite and cant wait to see it finished... keep elevatin in this shit we call the rap game.. PEACE
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11-07-03, 03:03 PM
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IP: 3A1D AC66
Way To Stay Up..
Not A Bad Drop.. Could Use Some Work And It Was Quite Short For An Open Mic But A Decent Drop None The Less Hook Up Sum Feed Back Here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php? |
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11-08-03, 11:42 PM
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IP: 32D9 0BD3
Decent drop! You got potential i can see it..just keep elevating and workin on it..aight peace
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11-10-03, 02:25 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
ay yall i need some feedback HOLLA AT ME __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________
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11-10-03, 09:16 PM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
i liked it needs brshing but ill none the less
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11-11-03, 12:58 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
ay yall come on i need some more fuckin feedback and if anyone wanna collabo lemme know and i might hit yall up with some more peices of the track later.....
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